for What is Life1/1/2005 c1 
270dustytiger
i like this.. i want to say it's chilling, tho i'm not really sure why i'm using the word
270dustytigeri like this.. i want to say it's chilling, tho i'm not really sure why i'm using the word
12/15/2004 c1 30Weeba
I like the rhythm and the lining in this poem; the broken air of it is fitting, and I'm fairly sure most of us can identify with this at one point or another in our lives, if not quite as intensely. Good job.
I prefer the last three stanzas to the first one myself; just something about it seems a little...overused? I'm not sure what the right word is there. But this is actually quite good, even if it isn't one of your babies.
30WeebaI like the rhythm and the lining in this poem; the broken air of it is fitting, and I'm fairly sure most of us can identify with this at one point or another in our lives, if not quite as intensely. Good job.
I prefer the last three stanzas to the first one myself; just something about it seems a little...overused? I'm not sure what the right word is there. But this is actually quite good, even if it isn't one of your babies.
10/19/2004 c1 Moroni's Daughter
Incredible. I particularly like the three lines "What is death but an oblivion tired souls fall into." Nice touch. Thank you for your reivew on my poem, Melting Oblivian.
-Moroni's daughter
Incredible. I particularly like the three lines "What is death but an oblivion tired souls fall into." Nice touch. Thank you for your reivew on my poem, Melting Oblivian.
-Moroni's daughter
9/17/2004 c1 1innocent shadows
i like that question-answer like poem.
i liked the last verse especially,
For what can my weary soul do but die?
that line was very emotional and you 'showed 'the poem well. well written. keep up^
1innocent shadowsi like that question-answer like poem.
i liked the last verse especially,
For what can my weary soul do but die?
that line was very emotional and you 'showed 'the poem well. well written. keep up^
9/10/2004 c1 5Cadrial
Sound's like the thought of someone who has not found themselves. Keep Looking, perhaps you'll find yourself hiding under the bed.
5CadrialSound's like the thought of someone who has not found themselves. Keep Looking, perhaps you'll find yourself hiding under the bed.
9/7/2004 c1 21Purified Angel
thx for reviewing my poem ^^. I like your poem, it's really intresting and also true in a way
21Purified Angelthx for reviewing my poem ^^. I like your poem, it's really intresting and also true in a way
8/24/2004 c1 3Tenika D
Wow . . . this is a really nice contemplative piece - the images are very simple, and at the same time, very personal, because most readers can ask themselves these same questions quite easily. Well done! ^^
~ Tenika Dargan
BTW, thank you so much for the review! *hug* As I said in my bio, I thrive on comments - you've made me feel special today. ^^
3Tenika DWow . . . this is a really nice contemplative piece - the images are very simple, and at the same time, very personal, because most readers can ask themselves these same questions quite easily. Well done! ^^
~ Tenika Dargan
BTW, thank you so much for the review! *hug* As I said in my bio, I thrive on comments - you've made me feel special today. ^^
8/22/2004 c1 6purplemuffin
very philosophic... and deep... i like this one better than the truths i would say one... it just has that kinda rhythm... what can i say? i'm a rhythm person!
6purplemuffinvery philosophic... and deep... i like this one better than the truths i would say one... it just has that kinda rhythm... what can i say? i'm a rhythm person!
8/19/2004 c1 10AzNDrEAmEr77
hhmm i thought i did a review on this, apparently not
well its really good as always
keep on writing like how everyone else says!
10AzNDrEAmEr77hhmm i thought i did a review on this, apparently not
well its really good as always
keep on writing like how everyone else says!
8/14/2004 c1 131happy thing
oh, this is very good. I like the way you wrap everything up in the last stanza. I suggest you write more...now!
131happy thingoh, this is very good. I like the way you wrap everything up in the last stanza. I suggest you write more...now!
8/14/2004 c1 51EternalTimexX
yea, that was very... well.. i liked it becae it was very deep, i thought ur words flowed very well... u haev a unique style... ~Keep Writing
51EternalTimexXyea, that was very... well.. i liked it becae it was very deep, i thought ur words flowed very well... u haev a unique style... ~Keep Writing
8/12/2004 c1 23vintage fade
All I can say is that this makes a lot of sense. The words are good, and I like the rhythm of the words. Good job.
23vintage fadeAll I can say is that this makes a lot of sense. The words are good, and I like the rhythm of the words. Good job.
8/12/2004 c1 6unsmooth sympathy
I like this one also i think i like this one a little better than the last one but they're both good. You use repercution alot it's a good quality if you don't use it to often. Any way another good poem. Thanx again for takeing the time to read mine, hope you read some of my others ^_^ C ya
6unsmooth sympathyI like this one also i think i like this one a little better than the last one but they're both good. You use repercution alot it's a good quality if you don't use it to often. Any way another good poem. Thanx again for takeing the time to read mine, hope you read some of my others ^_^ C ya