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3/25/2005 c1 25Munchin
you rhyme at times.. it gives this piece an interesting ring. I like it. the theme is good. it is emotion filled.. strong.. it is a story.
3/23/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
This seems so familiar with my pattern of life. A suffocating. The line, "gasping and grasping for one last drop." That just seems to bear down in my mind. Amazing how we get lost in the world and try to force our way out in excuses...or hide behind them. Sometimes both. I loved this poem though. I think so many people can relate to it. Great piece.
7/27/2004 c1 191Trinity Joselyn Carter
WOW! I LOVED THIS! IT WAS SOO GOOD!
7/26/2004 c1 TristeGaijin
Yeah, I know. ...Or maybe I don't. But that's not the point. This was very, very well done. I liked it a lot. Great job.
7/25/2004 c1 Anime Freakizoid
is this true? just wondering, but still another good poem...your truly going to be famous for poetry someday!
-anime freakizoid X^_^X

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