
4/25/2005 c1
67PaulAsaran
A lovable poem that I would best describe with the word "cute". I find your phraseology grand and your metaphores pleasing; I wish you luck on finding Mr. Right.

A lovable poem that I would best describe with the word "cute". I find your phraseology grand and your metaphores pleasing; I wish you luck on finding Mr. Right.
7/27/2004 c1
2philoslove
hahahahahaha! That was brilliant work, added with a dash of humour! Wonderful work! I was quite amused and was smiling when I read this, could just imagine the male bird's look and "Juliet's" persistant and firm look. Woah... really admire her. Really quite reflective of a personal non-existent love life! Well, hope you're a fighter for love too! I liked that line.

hahahahahaha! That was brilliant work, added with a dash of humour! Wonderful work! I was quite amused and was smiling when I read this, could just imagine the male bird's look and "Juliet's" persistant and firm look. Woah... really admire her. Really quite reflective of a personal non-existent love life! Well, hope you're a fighter for love too! I liked that line.