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9/10/2004 c1 el
hurri up and update lonie!
quick, b4 i get annoied... annoIIed... hurri up
dont b mean u noe u dun update half as quick as enuf;.
9/8/2004 c6 el
hurry up and update again! either stori!
hurri up@
lonie!
lalalala
very good chap
so if i praise u, it means very good and i need to update asap before el gets angry
9/7/2004 c6 wanderer
hmm.. this chapter helped explain some ideas formulating in my head.. but now who's going to be the bad guy? would gwyneth or leo tell the king and expose Yasmine... and then Damon would defend her? well update soon!
9/6/2004 c6 5CrystalDusk
what can i say leo? i'm spifflingly funny.
HAHAHAHAHAHA! leo cracks me up so bad! hey! you two have the same names! male leo, female leo, male leo, female leo. are you turning into one of those up yourself people who feature themselves in every story? honestly i thought you were more creative than that...
so whos gonna be evil huh? or is everything just gonna be happy happy joy joy in the kingdom of yas and damon? even gwyn's not evil any more...=( hell you even made her sound like a GOOD PERSON! i can't believe you'd do that to me! you know how i LOVE the evil ones!
go fares go fares! nothing like a horse to bring a guy and a chick together...-_-"
so like are you gonna make that valerie chick do anything evil? because seriously that whole ~*other princess marrying my true love*~ thing pisses me off. especially since there's nobody evil around for me to boo and hiss at.
so lil miz yas is like an angel sent down from heaven eh? her beauty RADIATES like none other eh? man you crack me up...that damon dude...is he on pot? or is yas on pot? or is the rest of the court on pot? or is it a combination of the above? because really i swear at least ONE PERSON in that story is on pot!
so gurl i'm glad you finally remembered this story. i guess the next one is in yas's pov? really do try making it as funny as damon...
9/5/2004 c6 el - like a true english nerd wif quotes and all
"Keep reviewing, and I know this chapter was kinda boring, but there'll be stuff happening soon ok? So review!"
Well, *ahem* Leona, if this chapter was kinda boring, as u unfortunately put it, it WASN'T, and since you so strongly, (sadly), believe, i demand another chapter to make up for it, on the Double!
Hurri up
good chapter...
although the adding of Teresia, or wotever was slightly more random than usual... ;)
this chappie was more straight to te point... not that thats a bad thing! :D
Hurri up, new chapter!
~el
9/5/2004 c6 xiaobudian
lolo! Anyway, this story is currently not v. exctiting so u have 2 make it exciting k?
Also I need help! For the egg marketing thing!
9/5/2004 c6 CheesyBiscuits
so leo lyks valarie? well thats good. update soon. good chappie!
9/5/2004 c6 10ibjuicen
O, anytime for reviewing...lol.
This chapter took quite long but I find a liking to it...Keep it up...^^
I want to see what happens in the upcoming chapters, if it doesn't take forever to be updated...-_-...^_^
9/3/2004 c5 2my-side-of-the-story
blow kisses your way? *cough cough* isn't dat a bit...tad too emotional 4 my beloved leo?~?~ lol~
anywayz, dat chapter was very well written, maybe u should think about expanding each scene nxt time. no... im not tryin 2 sound like u'r english teacher here but... heah... im helpin u...dot dot dot...
all things aside, it was a fantastic chapter!~ i reali, reali enjoyed it... huri up and update! lol~ sori...
:)
p.s. dis chapter is betr than da lazt!~ i cant WAIT 2 read wat's gonna happen 2/wif da horse!~ u all kno im horse mad...
lol~ :)
9/1/2004 c5 wanderer
wow.. i LOVE this story! UPDATE SOON! i dont realli lyk dat gwenyth person.. she's so MEAN nd RUDE.. i mean she ALREADY betrayed Yasmine's mom and now she's STILL getting the daughter? and o yea an idea just popped into my head... what if Damon and his father were the enemies of Yasmine's parents and they were the ones who took over Yasmine's kingdom.. that would make Damon and Yasmine enemies... nd i like the twist w/ princess Valerie.. i guess the saying is true that there is more to a book than it's cover.. hehe..
9/1/2004 c5 wanderer
wow.. i LOVE this story! UPDATE SOON! i dont realli lyk dat gwenyth person.. she's so MEAN nd RUDE.. i mean she ALREADY betrayed Yasmine's mom and now she's STILL getting the daughter? and o yea an idea just popped into my head... what if Damon and his father were the enemies of Yasmine's parents and they were the ones who took over Yasmine's kingdom.. that would make Damon and Yasmine enemies... nd i like the twist w/ princess Valerie.. i guess the saying is true that there is more to a book than it's cover.. hehe..
8/21/2004 c5 el
*ahem*, very good, but id like it if u updated sooner... good, keep it up
8/21/2004 c5 2MarielleRay
great story! update soon!
8/20/2004 c5 eva
lol! "I was confused at his confusion"
sounds just like lil leona! ^-^
gr... gwenyth is such a bi-aytch! Anyway, nice 2 know that velerie is a good person.
8/20/2004 c5 CheesyBiscuits
man. gwenyth is such a witch. i hope that she gets twice as many whippings as she gave yasmine.
poor valerie. i gets she isnt a b*itch after all. i hope that everything works out ok 4 her. update soon.
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