for Light in Shadow7/15/2005 c1 
32shinco
Ah, what a nice poem that was! No matter what, there's always at least a tiny flicker of hope even when all things seem out of whack completely and hopeless! Very nice message, and wonderfully written poem with very nice imagery! I LOVED IT BUNCHES! ^_^
32shincoAh, what a nice poem that was! No matter what, there's always at least a tiny flicker of hope even when all things seem out of whack completely and hopeless! Very nice message, and wonderfully written poem with very nice imagery! I LOVED IT BUNCHES! ^_^
7/5/2005 c1 13Eyes Unclouded
I liked the duality - how one stanza ended in darkness and the other in light (or hope, rather). The lines "A trace of hope/Worn but bright" had good imagery.
Simple and good.
13Eyes UncloudedI liked the duality - how one stanza ended in darkness and the other in light (or hope, rather). The lines "A trace of hope/Worn but bright" had good imagery.
Simple and good.
6/3/2005 c1 33Quebrada Angel
Light... *trying to sort out what to say* *thinking very hard* all i can say is Wow... lightly and with so much respect.
33Quebrada AngelLight... *trying to sort out what to say* *thinking very hard* all i can say is Wow... lightly and with so much respect.
5/24/2005 c1 65scudcrow
"Hope"-is most powerful when all seems to fail. The series seem to be connected by invisible dots in the wind...we know it's there, but can't always prove so!
Je l'aime,
~K
65scudcrow"Hope"-is most powerful when all seems to fail. The series seem to be connected by invisible dots in the wind...we know it's there, but can't always prove so!
Je l'aime,
~K
5/24/2005 c1 37Diane Lynn
I like how you used short phrases, but were able to easily get the point across. I love the descriptiveness in this poem as well!
37Diane LynnI like how you used short phrases, but were able to easily get the point across. I love the descriptiveness in this poem as well!
5/22/2005 c1 19Zeheria
CoolI like this it is very fast paced but in a way to the exact point while using detail. good work! ~Zeheria
19ZeheriaCoolI like this it is very fast paced but in a way to the exact point while using detail. good work! ~Zeheria
5/16/2005 c1 celentia-changingacconts
sort of every cloud has a silver lining huh! it's a good poem keep it up!
sort of every cloud has a silver lining huh! it's a good poem keep it up!
4/24/2005 c1 1another randomnobody
this is an awsome poem thanxs for the review on my war poem ps i am keeping up the great work just like you said although im not so sure if its all that great but your poems awsome keep up the great work to
1another randomnobodythis is an awsome poem thanxs for the review on my war poem ps i am keeping up the great work just like you said although im not so sure if its all that great but your poems awsome keep up the great work to