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9/6/2004 c1 
11Cloud Burstblushingly beautiful! so intimate and deep, well done!
8/24/2004 c1 14ChenGreat poem you got there. Very descriptive. Maybe one day... it will be accepted by the world... before that... I'll wait
-Chen
7/27/2004 c1 4TeamZeroEffin wow... I love your poetry and this is exactly why. I can (quite literally) feel all of the passion in this... You are an excellent writer.
7/27/2004 c1 54Clouden3What could I say? This is pure excellence. You and your wife can vividly express your love for each other and your sexual moments so well. I'm just completely blown away, man, can I get a picture of the two of you. You guys are amazing!
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14Chen