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8/25/2004 c1 David Stephen
This was again, another impressive piece. *thumbs up* Continue! ~David~
8/23/2004 c1 11thewriterlioness
awesome rhythm. this would be incredible for reading out loud. very powerful too. you get your message across in a couple of words.
8/5/2004 c1 93Nienyalie
Wow, really well written. Good job.
7/30/2004 c1 2Satanic Grace
(Saoni)
I really like this poem, out of all your work. Love it. It really connects with me, somehow. Thanks for putting me on faves!
7/29/2004 c1 Hawke
ooh. So innocent yet so...deadly. Love the repetition.
~Hawke
7/29/2004 c1 7Ironiclife
Wow . . . that's really intense... but I can understand. Trying to live up to everyone expectations in life and "just smiling" and bearing through everyday can be so horrible. you need a punching bag. That's what I do. *wink* thanks for reviewing, you're not so bad yourself!
7/29/2004 c1 42Jackie Hina
I absoltutely love the structure of this poem. It has *great* flow! Great job!
7/29/2004 c1 169Crimson Riley
wow this poem is so amazing! for me it has so much depth, i love it!
7/28/2004 c1 14SexyGreenFrog
Wow, I like how your wrote it, it feels like the room is spinning out of control. I can feel the words as if they are being said to me directly. Good Job.
7/28/2004 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow~ love the message here^^ and yeah
slightly violent, but it was good~
keep writing!

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