
2/22/2014 c20 fall4you
Yeah, well, the king did agree to it due to his sincere love to is daughter ... very good father though... Fury and Coral were a dashing match. Very well written and worth reading..
P.S. Please do write other inspirational stories and well, they should be like this - fairytales. Yeah, I am absolutely your fan now.
Yeah, well, the king did agree to it due to his sincere love to is daughter ... very good father though... Fury and Coral were a dashing match. Very well written and worth reading..
P.S. Please do write other inspirational stories and well, they should be like this - fairytales. Yeah, I am absolutely your fan now.
4/6/2012 c29 Ellorie Grey
This was beautiful, and I'm very grateful that you've written it. The characterization was fantastic, and the whole piece was engaging. I would have liked for the story to be longer, and to have had more conflict, but I can't fault such a sweet, lovely story.
This was beautiful, and I'm very grateful that you've written it. The characterization was fantastic, and the whole piece was engaging. I would have liked for the story to be longer, and to have had more conflict, but I can't fault such a sweet, lovely story.
12/11/2010 c19 The Crazy Cat Lady
"I did not want Coral marrying any man at all. I wanted Coral to marry me."
Gosh. That was beautiful and strong.
"I did not want Coral marrying any man at all. I wanted Coral to marry me."
Gosh. That was beautiful and strong.
8/13/2005 c29 Pixie in a Birdcage
*sniff sniff* It's beautiful! Wonderfully romantic! Coral reminds me of a girl I have a crush on *^-^*
*sniff sniff* It's beautiful! Wonderfully romantic! Coral reminds me of a girl I have a crush on *^-^*
4/15/2005 c29
15A. Barone
OMG so good, so good, is there going to be more? I hope that there is more. ^_^

OMG so good, so good, is there going to be more? I hope that there is more. ^_^
3/16/2005 c29
36Somnia
Wow...that is just...wow! So well written, so beautiful. Its like an alternative fairy tale but not at all soppy or childish. I really really enjoyed reading it, more than anything else I've read recently. You have a powerful gift of creating realistic characters.
Well done!
Somnia x

Wow...that is just...wow! So well written, so beautiful. Its like an alternative fairy tale but not at all soppy or childish. I really really enjoyed reading it, more than anything else I've read recently. You have a powerful gift of creating realistic characters.
Well done!
Somnia x
1/22/2005 c29 Queen Thayet
That was a touching story! Very poetic and overall wonderfull.
That was a touching story! Very poetic and overall wonderfull.
10/10/2004 c29
4TeamZero
This is by far, one of the best stories I have ever read. The "exotic" fairy tale theme really struck me. I'm very happy for you and your wife and hope that the relationship inspires more beautiful work.

This is by far, one of the best stories I have ever read. The "exotic" fairy tale theme really struck me. I'm very happy for you and your wife and hope that the relationship inspires more beautiful work.
9/8/2004 c29
11Cloud Burst
this is a beautiful story, full of emotions and exquisite descriptions, please continue writing the story, it would make me ever so happy!

this is a beautiful story, full of emotions and exquisite descriptions, please continue writing the story, it would make me ever so happy!
8/8/2004 c29
19Wolf Queen Lover
Ah, My dear Gypsy, poeple call the Rom theives, but I have given you my heart and soul and all that I am. Woe to any who would doubt my love for you!

Ah, My dear Gypsy, poeple call the Rom theives, but I have given you my heart and soul and all that I am. Woe to any who would doubt my love for you!
8/8/2004 c28 Wolf Queen Lover
Ok, My Fury, you "muttered concer over a proper gift" but never mention it again.
But I would never want another gift, having received you!
Ok, My Fury, you "muttered concer over a proper gift" but never mention it again.
But I would never want another gift, having received you!
8/8/2004 c27 Wolf Queen Lover
My only gripe is that I did not bring you to court as an adviser long before, but that is cuz I hate to be seperated from you and know your wisdom.
My only gripe is that I did not bring you to court as an adviser long before, but that is cuz I hate to be seperated from you and know your wisdom.