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7/31/2004 c1 2joanna m. w
Wow, I am at a loss of words this was really really good! I'm usually not really into poetry and all, but this piece has really caught my eye, awesome job!
bLaCkRoSe @-,-
7/30/2004 c1 3penumbral
Gorgeous, well-written piece, about a feeling I think most of us can relate to. I especially loved the "gasping, grasping" alliteration, and the "As you falter my soul crumbles As a solitary tear cracks down your face like a spider's net"...empathy can hurt deep sometimes.
Yours in awe,
jalisco-psyche

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