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5/29/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
This is so simple and heartfelt. Beautiful piece.
1/6/2005 c1 HideAwayFairy
Very beautiful, I get an image of a young maiden staring out into the winter night..beautiful.
12/30/2004 c1 Ivriniel
Wow, beautifully written, especially the second stanza. Well done.
12/20/2004 c1 1Firestarter911
I'm not sure if the imagery or the emotion of this made it more enjoyable...kudos!
8/23/2004 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
Nice. Very nice.
-Dracula-
8/18/2004 c1 24katmonkey
I love this haiku. It's so beautiful and the imagery at the start is great.
8/12/2004 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Hello- Excellent Haiku.
8/3/2004 c1 40Merit Somnia
Love the second line, goes very well with the first. Day... was also used well. as the title atested (sp?) very hopeful, especially ending.
8/3/2004 c1 76CoolBeans18s
So beautiful! And yet so sad... What an amazing piece! There's so much emotion in it.
~ CoolBeans18s
8/1/2004 c1 7Shadow of Silver
I like this poem, it seems alot like the soldiers in Iraq whom are being strangely beheaded daily -_- and the others still awaiting their return home. Nice job
[~Shadow of Silver~]
8/1/2004 c1 168SeaVoi
I like this, its relaxing!
7/31/2004 c1 Hail the Warrior
To bring me back to you...sorry, it wouldn't fit but it rung out loud in my mind.
Beautiful
(Why did you take almost all of your poetry down?)
HtW
7/31/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
aw very sweet and sad.. I love the ending

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