for Game Over4/21/2017 c8 SistyMisty
This is such a brilliant story. I hope you get back to it someday. Leaving it on a cliffhanger like this is a bit cruel.
This is such a brilliant story. I hope you get back to it someday. Leaving it on a cliffhanger like this is a bit cruel.
3/18/2017 c8 Lexie.Loo
Ahhh I hope you finish this one day! It's so good!
Ahhh I hope you finish this one day! It's so good!
1/19/2017 c8 Nightlockiss
This remains one of my favourite stories I've ever read, online or otherwise, and i just wanted to say that I still think about it (that's how fucking good it is)~
This remains one of my favourite stories I've ever read, online or otherwise, and i just wanted to say that I still think about it (that's how fucking good it is)~
11/30/2016 c8 MisterCrown
I need more.
I need more.
8/19/2016 c8 10 years a fan
Decided to re-read this story. Still as good as the first dozen times ;). Thanks again for having written this.
Decided to re-read this story. Still as good as the first dozen times ;). Thanks again for having written this.
8/9/2016 c8 Guest
Update?
Update?
8/9/2016 c5 QT
Huhuhu stop bullying!
Huhuhu shaaaane imma hug you riiight nooow!
Huhuhu stop bullying!
Huhuhu shaaaane imma hug you riiight nooow!
3/12/2016 c8 Guest
if I must choose one character I hate the most in this story that would be Zinc. Seriously he is more trouble than worth and of course, useless.
if I must choose one character I hate the most in this story that would be Zinc. Seriously he is more trouble than worth and of course, useless.
7/21/2015 c8 
1Ash Colored Wings
Wowwwwweewwwwwwwwww im blasted away, this could legitimately be a book. It's definitely better than some books I've read. Whether you continue it or not (PLEASE DO HOLY SHIT THAT THING GOT HIS SISTER?! AND DEVON HOLY SHIT?! UGHGGGGHHHH IM DEAD) you have a lot of skill in writing and a crazy great imagination, and your story draws me in and is pretty flawless tbh imo. Aaah. I love it. I love you. I would srsly pay you to continue this if ik u in real life lmao. Have a good day!
1Ash Colored WingsWowwwwweewwwwwwwwww im blasted away, this could legitimately be a book. It's definitely better than some books I've read. Whether you continue it or not (PLEASE DO HOLY SHIT THAT THING GOT HIS SISTER?! AND DEVON HOLY SHIT?! UGHGGGGHHHH IM DEAD) you have a lot of skill in writing and a crazy great imagination, and your story draws me in and is pretty flawless tbh imo. Aaah. I love it. I love you. I would srsly pay you to continue this if ik u in real life lmao. Have a good day!
2/15/2015 c8 artnoveau
Right now I am actually praying that you are already working on another chapter.
Please, its so amazing.
And you kicked the stakes up just at the right moment. You clearly know what you are doing.
Right now I am actually praying that you are already working on another chapter.
Please, its so amazing.
And you kicked the stakes up just at the right moment. You clearly know what you are doing.
6/14/2014 c4 1Everfew
So cool! Is this storx abandonned? It's been a while, and an update would be really appreciated.
1EverfewSo cool! Is this storx abandonned? It's been a while, and an update would be really appreciated.
4/27/2014 c8 Guest
Omg omg omgomgomgomgomgomg ! Why did you leave it there ! If your reading this please please update it ! I love this story toooo much you have to update it !
Omg omg omgomgomgomgomgomg ! Why did you leave it there ! If your reading this please please update it ! I love this story toooo much you have to update it !