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5/23/2003 c1 8CraigAPrice
I really like the story. It's the kind that when you read it, you want it to keep going on and never stop. You must put more up on it. I agree with Willum, it's hard to follow. But that's very easy to change, post a new story, or new chapter.
5/21/2003 c1 7Rosebay
That was such a good story! I want to read more of your stories, if you have any more. :)
1/14/2001 c1 Pitbull Girl
Sounds like a good start
1/7/2001 c1 chibi princess
I know. I've always known. My house is haunted, although, I mean, come on right? Scarey. Good. Truthful.
1/7/2001 c1 41Willum
Well, I did want to read this, but your formatting leaves a lot to be desired. All bunched together like it is, it's hard to follow along without losing track of exactly which line you're on. Try to reformat it and post it again, you'll be doing a lot for your protential readers.

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