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12/13/2002 c1 8Alio Laski
Pretty good. I have a few tips, though:

1) Check your spelling, punctuation, capitalization, etc. (Grammar, in short.)

2) Unless they're the articulate type, normally people don't speak with every work pronounced; most people nowadays (that I know of) use words like "it's" instead of "it is" and such. But otherwise, I'm very interested!

~TBH (unincorporated

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