11/27/2004 c1 31Cindy Moon
Good content. I'm all for freeverse and everything, but with a little more format this would make a kickass poem. Work with your rants and vents into structure and you will never know where it'll take you.Anyways, good poem nevertheless.-Cindy Moon *)
Good content. I'm all for freeverse and everything, but with a little more format this would make a kickass poem. Work with your rants and vents into structure and you will never know where it'll take you.Anyways, good poem nevertheless.-Cindy Moon *)