
8/14/2004 c2
1Drowning in Thought
This sounds so familiar. *hint hint* lolz. Anywayz Ash, GREAT STORY! YOU MUST UPDATE! NOW! repeat after me, I WILL UPDATE! lolz. Any way, keep it up!

This sounds so familiar. *hint hint* lolz. Anywayz Ash, GREAT STORY! YOU MUST UPDATE! NOW! repeat after me, I WILL UPDATE! lolz. Any way, keep it up!
8/12/2004 c2
2Queen of dawn
This is good so far but i would advice you to add more description because so far its just dialogue, sorry i don't mean to be picky.

This is good so far but i would advice you to add more description because so far its just dialogue, sorry i don't mean to be picky.