for The Point8/11/2004 c1 
2Lonely-River-Boy
I applaud you... Beautiful ending! Your going on my favorite Authors list. Keep up the awesome work!
LRB
2Lonely-River-BoyI applaud you... Beautiful ending! Your going on my favorite Authors list. Keep up the awesome work!
LRB
8/8/2004 c1 5Thepolia
I just finished reading your 'rhymed version' and then I read this one. The rhymed version is better polished, but I like this ending more... I mean, it's 'I look at you' instead of listening to words that are true... This seems to be less passive
5ThepoliaI just finished reading your 'rhymed version' and then I read this one. The rhymed version is better polished, but I like this ending more... I mean, it's 'I look at you' instead of listening to words that are true... This seems to be less passive
8/7/2004 c1 10Moonlit Fairy Wings
I absolutely love this poem. Its brilliant.There are days when "whats the point" is the only thing that goes through my head. This portrays it perfectly!
10Moonlit Fairy WingsI absolutely love this poem. Its brilliant.There are days when "whats the point" is the only thing that goes through my head. This portrays it perfectly!
8/7/2004 c1 7Hannah Jae
Wow,
I really love this. The ending is great. "And I remember
The point of my life is you." Great job.
7Hannah JaeWow,
I really love this. The ending is great. "And I remember
The point of my life is you." Great job.
8/6/2004 c1 nick-wordsmith
Very well done. I like this. Maybve you could read one of my poems called 'Sinking'... I think you might see something in it. Anyway, very well done. I will read more of your work
Stones decay, words last
Nick
Very well done. I like this. Maybve you could read one of my poems called 'Sinking'... I think you might see something in it. Anyway, very well done. I will read more of your work
Stones decay, words last
Nick
8/5/2004 c1 122alwayslove
Almost cried, I swear. I love it! Thanks for reading mine too. Plz keep wirintg, I'd buy your stuff!
122alwaysloveAlmost cried, I swear. I love it! Thanks for reading mine too. Plz keep wirintg, I'd buy your stuff!
8/5/2004 c1 51kawaii-kirei
So true. ^_^ Every question kept on making me smile, and the problem is, it's all true! This is great! Well written, too. And thanks for reviewing my poem! ^^
51kawaii-kireiSo true. ^_^ Every question kept on making me smile, and the problem is, it's all true! This is great! Well written, too. And thanks for reviewing my poem! ^^
8/5/2004 c1 335chainedfreedom
What's the point of looking forward
If you can’t even look back?
-so true its annoying.
kewl poem, and has a sweet ending.
thanx 4 the review! ^^
335chainedfreedomWhat's the point of looking forward
If you can’t even look back?
-so true its annoying.
kewl poem, and has a sweet ending.
thanx 4 the review! ^^
8/3/2004 c1 65John Ferguson
Heya,
That was really deep, loved the ending most.You obviously thought alot about this 1, Congrats, another sucess
65John FergusonHeya,
That was really deep, loved the ending most.You obviously thought alot about this 1, Congrats, another sucess