for Your Necklace8/11/2004 c1 Clodhopper
it's pretty good. for a song, tho, u might want to try and lengthen the verses a little & make the chorus a little more obvious. i wasn't sure which lines were the chorus & which were the verses. um, u have the wrong kind of your in there, should be you're. other than that, it was a nice read
~Ty
it's pretty good. for a song, tho, u might want to try and lengthen the verses a little & make the chorus a little more obvious. i wasn't sure which lines were the chorus & which were the verses. um, u have the wrong kind of your in there, should be you're. other than that, it was a nice read
~Ty
8/11/2004 c1 
52lola-in-slacks
Yeah I think thats quite nice... does it have a tune? I can imagine it being country. Thanks for the review doll.
52lola-in-slacksYeah I think thats quite nice... does it have a tune? I can imagine it being country. Thanks for the review doll.