for This Storm4/30/2018 c38 Guest
This is absolutely one of my most favourite story here on FictionPress. I loved it to the very end. It had a great balance of romance, humour and friendship! It was very well-written and very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing it with us :)
This is absolutely one of my most favourite story here on FictionPress. I loved it to the very end. It had a great balance of romance, humour and friendship! It was very well-written and very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing it with us :)
2/12/2015 c8 Kalilah
Falling in love with Tristan already. To be honest I was shipping Tristan and Winter before but I can tell it's a lost cause from this chapter. Oh wells, maybe I'll start shipping Winter and Zach soon.
Falling in love with Tristan already. To be honest I was shipping Tristan and Winter before but I can tell it's a lost cause from this chapter. Oh wells, maybe I'll start shipping Winter and Zach soon.
1/7/2015 c38 
3gyoung
Thanks for writing this story. It took me a while (like three days) to finish reading it, but definitely worth it! I love that you threw in there Spanish, Italian, and a bit of Russian. My mother tongue is Spanish and whenever I see it in a story, I get this huge grin on my face. And, I have to ask, have you studied Spanish and/or Italian before?
Me encanto esta historia. Te felicito, pues esta muy bien escrita y los personajes que creaste son ùnicos.
3gyoungThanks for writing this story. It took me a while (like three days) to finish reading it, but definitely worth it! I love that you threw in there Spanish, Italian, and a bit of Russian. My mother tongue is Spanish and whenever I see it in a story, I get this huge grin on my face. And, I have to ask, have you studied Spanish and/or Italian before?
Me encanto esta historia. Te felicito, pues esta muy bien escrita y los personajes que creaste son ùnicos.
1/6/2015 c30 gyoung
I think my heart started pounding when Winter and Zack hugged. I have a huge smile on my face. They are so darn cute. My heart is melting. I want to cry.
I think my heart started pounding when Winter and Zack hugged. I have a huge smile on my face. They are so darn cute. My heart is melting. I want to cry.
8/8/2014 c1 heya
I dont know why this didn't break the 1000000000000 review record.
I dont know why this didn't break the 1000000000000 review record.
12/13/2013 c29 silentvoiceshout
Zack's father must have had a hand in him not writing to her ..or never gave her letters to him...
Zack's father must have had a hand in him not writing to her ..or never gave her letters to him...
9/9/2013 c13 Guest
amaaaaaaaaazing
amaaaaaaaaazing
7/1/2013 c23 Downright-Nerd
I just balled my eyes out reading this.
This is the first story that has ever made me cry like I just did.
Wow.
I'm utterly speechless.
I just balled my eyes out reading this.
This is the first story that has ever made me cry like I just did.
Wow.
I'm utterly speechless.
4/1/2013 c38 Dominique Diane
I can't believe that Joshua Crowne sold the house, fired Victoria and isn't giving money to Zack! Oh dear lord, I miss Leo! Great story, took me 1 week to finish it (vacations got in my way)
Regards,
Diane Potter.
I can't believe that Joshua Crowne sold the house, fired Victoria and isn't giving money to Zack! Oh dear lord, I miss Leo! Great story, took me 1 week to finish it (vacations got in my way)
Regards,
Diane Potter.
12/21/2012 c38 glowingstar101
THIS IS OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE STORY ON FICTIONPRESS (I think?) LOL this was seriously so sweet and exciting :)) great job!
THIS IS OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE STORY ON FICTIONPRESS (I think?) LOL this was seriously so sweet and exciting :)) great job!
12/19/2012 c8 glowingstar101
Winter and Tristan are so cute! Can we have them together? :)) haha but I like Zack too :p
Winter and Tristan are so cute! Can we have them together? :)) haha but I like Zack too :p
11/22/2012 c8 1leavesfallingup
Tristan and Winter truly do think of themselves as brother and sister if they can be in that position and experience no feelings beyond kinship. For the first few chapters I imagined that Tristan might develop feelings, but if her wearing his clothes and sleeping in his lap didn't provoke certain ideas, then it is safe to assume that they will never develop romantic feelings.
Tristan was right about one thing: Zach is pursuing the wrong girl.
1leavesfallingupTristan and Winter truly do think of themselves as brother and sister if they can be in that position and experience no feelings beyond kinship. For the first few chapters I imagined that Tristan might develop feelings, but if her wearing his clothes and sleeping in his lap didn't provoke certain ideas, then it is safe to assume that they will never develop romantic feelings.
Tristan was right about one thing: Zach is pursuing the wrong girl.
11/22/2012 c6 leavesfallingup
It seems a little weird for Winter to ask Eva if she would like to date Zack while she is wearing the boy's jacket; a little psychological puzzle there? As in: saying one thing while trying to communicate another?
It seems a little weird for Winter to ask Eva if she would like to date Zack while she is wearing the boy's jacket; a little psychological puzzle there? As in: saying one thing while trying to communicate another?
11/22/2012 c5 leavesfallingup
Will Zach become the wedge that drives Winter and Eva apart. That would be sad, especially since your summary suggests that he will be leaving soon.
Will Zach become the wedge that drives Winter and Eva apart. That would be sad, especially since your summary suggests that he will be leaving soon.