for Lullaby5/28/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
i love this! i can really picture it being said to someone, im not too keen on the very ending with the repetition on "shade" in the last 4 lines, it just lacks the closure that would have been great for this, as i expected it to rhyme with something and not just be repeated, it kinda stopped my image and i was really aware of it, anyway, i like all the rest of this, espcially the parts like "unmade and unbroken" and all the parts about fairies and stars, very pretty x weasel within x
i love this! i can really picture it being said to someone, im not too keen on the very ending with the repetition on "shade" in the last 4 lines, it just lacks the closure that would have been great for this, as i expected it to rhyme with something and not just be repeated, it kinda stopped my image and i was really aware of it, anyway, i like all the rest of this, espcially the parts like "unmade and unbroken" and all the parts about fairies and stars, very pretty x weasel within x
3/27/2005 c1 
87youzi
This is really sweet and pretty..loved "Porcelain faeries" and "For tomorrow's a promise Unmade and unbroken". Nice work! Keep it up =D
87youziThis is really sweet and pretty..loved "Porcelain faeries" and "For tomorrow's a promise Unmade and unbroken". Nice work! Keep it up =D
1/14/2005 c1 contrivant
I love it...I'm going to sing it to the girls I babysit, it's very serene...not quaint...serene.
I love it...I'm going to sing it to the girls I babysit, it's very serene...not quaint...serene.
11/22/2004 c1 22Toast n Guitars
Very cute. I really like it. It would be interesting to hear it put to guitar. If you ever do, you should post your cords up as well. -Toast
22Toast n GuitarsVery cute. I really like it. It would be interesting to hear it put to guitar. If you ever do, you should post your cords up as well. -Toast
10/3/2004 c1 3ThoseRainyDays
Amazing! You are so talented. I'm jealous! . All of your work is so good...adding you to my favorite list right now!
-Rainy
3ThoseRainyDaysAmazing! You are so talented. I'm jealous! . All of your work is so good...adding you to my favorite list right now!
-Rainy