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8/28/2004 c1 morbid
This is really good. I like it a lot. Sin is bad!
8/8/2004 c1 depressed elf
Nice Poem Nice pome!
8/7/2004 c1 ruined life
Very nice I like your style!
8/7/2004 c1 25Faerie Corpse
Are you sure you're okay? YOU still seem a little messed up to me. JJ i love yoU! This one was really good, it describes sin really good.
8/4/2004 c1 suzieque2
So true. I struggle with this a lot myself (winces)
8/4/2004 c1 5Blackout the Swordsman
It sounds like the person is struggling to lift the chains while he's talking. Five bonus points for style.
8/3/2004 c1 chocolaate puffs and all that jazz I want chocolate can you hear me I remember it clearly. Me hungry Can I sing
Good job your poems are so good!
8/3/2004 c1 Beaten withered rose
This is really good. It seems like your describing your pain. I like it. It's really good.
8/3/2004 c1 1x0x-Still-Alive-x0x
That was great! ^_^ btw, sorry i made you cry (is that supposed to be a bad thing or good?) lol
8/3/2004 c1 123GothicSpook
I like it! Sounds like you became stronger throughout the poem and I like that! Really well done!
8/3/2004 c1 3Marisa Rae
This is a good poem, although I'm not sure why it's rated PG.
8/3/2004 c1 crazy
This is realy good too. I like it I think you did a good job of showing what you wanted to!

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