for The chain8/28/2004 c1 morbid
This is really good. I like it a lot. Sin is bad!
This is really good. I like it a lot. Sin is bad!
8/8/2004 c1 depressed elf
Nice Poem Nice pome!
Nice Poem Nice pome!
8/7/2004 c1 ruined life
Very nice I like your style!
Very nice I like your style!
8/7/2004 c1 
25Faerie Corpse
Are you sure you're okay? YOU still seem a little messed up to me. JJ i love yoU! This one was really good, it describes sin really good.
25Faerie CorpseAre you sure you're okay? YOU still seem a little messed up to me. JJ i love yoU! This one was really good, it describes sin really good.
8/4/2004 c1 5Blackout the Swordsman
It sounds like the person is struggling to lift the chains while he's talking. Five bonus points for style.
5Blackout the SwordsmanIt sounds like the person is struggling to lift the chains while he's talking. Five bonus points for style.
8/3/2004 c1 chocolaate puffs and all that jazz I want chocolate can you hear me I remember it clearly. Me hungry Can I sing
Good job your poems are so good!
Good job your poems are so good!
8/3/2004 c1 Beaten withered rose
This is really good. It seems like your describing your pain. I like it. It's really good.
This is really good. It seems like your describing your pain. I like it. It's really good.
8/3/2004 c1 1x0x-Still-Alive-x0x
That was great! ^_^ btw, sorry i made you cry (is that supposed to be a bad thing or good?) lol
1x0x-Still-Alive-x0xThat was great! ^_^ btw, sorry i made you cry (is that supposed to be a bad thing or good?) lol
8/3/2004 c1 123GothicSpook
I like it! Sounds like you became stronger throughout the poem and I like that! Really well done!
123GothicSpookI like it! Sounds like you became stronger throughout the poem and I like that! Really well done!
8/3/2004 c1 crazy
This is realy good too. I like it I think you did a good job of showing what you wanted to!
This is realy good too. I like it I think you did a good job of showing what you wanted to!