for The Silver Wolf8/7/2004 c3 Iceunia
i like this story! it's really cool! but u made one mistake in the second chap..."Rayne, leave him alone. We can't trust him..." i think it's supposed to be we can trust him. thats it.
i like this story! it's really cool! but u made one mistake in the second chap..."Rayne, leave him alone. We can't trust him..." i think it's supposed to be we can trust him. thats it.