for Truths I Would Say10/17/2004 c1 
42Firefly of the Cosmos
I see. I like it really I do, but sometimes hearing the truth can hurt.
42Firefly of the CosmosI see. I like it really I do, but sometimes hearing the truth can hurt.
10/5/2004 c1 72kerbieflaw
people just don't like hearing the truth...
but that makes them cowards.
so... just speak the truth.
and keep trying. ;)
72kerbieflawpeople just don't like hearing the truth...
but that makes them cowards.
so... just speak the truth.
and keep trying. ;)
9/17/2004 c1 1innocent shadows
though repetitive, the truth i would say is that its very deep and soulful. ^ ^
the third verse sounded a little puzzling at first because of te repetition of fear and truth but you generally carved the poem quite well. ~
1innocent shadowsthough repetitive, the truth i would say is that its very deep and soulful. ^ ^
the third verse sounded a little puzzling at first because of te repetition of fear and truth but you generally carved the poem quite well. ~
9/13/2004 c1 26Jitterrue
excellent use of repetition / refrain. Now I am curious as to what those truths may be ^_^
26Jitterrueexcellent use of repetition / refrain. Now I am curious as to what those truths may be ^_^
9/10/2004 c1 5Cadrial
Very thought provoking. For a long time I didn't want to publish my littles works for the very reason given here.
5CadrialVery thought provoking. For a long time I didn't want to publish my littles works for the very reason given here.
8/14/2004 c1 51EternalTimexX
that s really something to think about so im off to do that right now... review somemore of my stuff and ill review more of urs...
51EternalTimexXthat s really something to think about so im off to do that right now... review somemore of my stuff and ill review more of urs...
8/12/2004 c1 23vintage fade
You know... This is good. I like how you end lines at certain spots and don't really follow the standard way to write a poem. *smiles* I do that too. Good job. I liked it.
23vintage fadeYou know... This is good. I like how you end lines at certain spots and don't really follow the standard way to write a poem. *smiles* I do that too. Good job. I liked it.
8/12/2004 c1 6unsmooth sympathy
Sounds very deep. I like it alot. It says 'Truths I would say' alot tho. Well that is the name of the poem ofocourse. lol
Oh and thanx for reading my poem. It's pretty much about words and how most of the time they are used to hurt people. But you have to remember words are just words weather they're good or bad. It was right after a fight with one of my friends. Not one of my best poems but i like it. You should read my other ones to i would epreciate it ^_^
Any way great poem i think i'll read your other one now ^_^
6unsmooth sympathySounds very deep. I like it alot. It says 'Truths I would say' alot tho. Well that is the name of the poem ofocourse. lol
Oh and thanx for reading my poem. It's pretty much about words and how most of the time they are used to hurt people. But you have to remember words are just words weather they're good or bad. It was right after a fight with one of my friends. Not one of my best poems but i like it. You should read my other ones to i would epreciate it ^_^
Any way great poem i think i'll read your other one now ^_^
8/12/2004 c1 Ephemeral Seraphim
This is wonderful! It deep...thought-provoking...just like a master poet. Keep up the good work! Hasta luego!
chibichocobo
This is wonderful! It deep...thought-provoking...just like a master poet. Keep up the good work! Hasta luego!
chibichocobo