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10/17/2004 c1 42Firefly of the Cosmos
I see. I like it really I do, but sometimes hearing the truth can hurt.
10/5/2004 c1 72kerbieflaw
people just don't like hearing the truth...
but that makes them cowards.
so... just speak the truth.
and keep trying. ;)
9/21/2004 c1 7Quill of sanguinity
Hello! Rather nice poem I should say. Continue writing Quid!
9/17/2004 c1 1innocent shadows
though repetitive, the truth i would say is that its very deep and soulful. ^ ^
the third verse sounded a little puzzling at first because of te repetition of fear and truth but you generally carved the poem quite well. ~
9/13/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
good use of repetition. liked the third verse in particular.
9/13/2004 c1 26Jitterrue
excellent use of repetition / refrain. Now I am curious as to what those truths may be ^_^
9/10/2004 c1 5Cadrial
Very thought provoking. For a long time I didn't want to publish my littles works for the very reason given here.
8/23/2004 c1 99Little Miss Shadow
An echo of wisdom. Very well done.
8/22/2004 c1 6purplemuffin
a bit repetitive, and its not exactly a smooth rhythm... but not bad
8/14/2004 c1 131happy thing
8/14/2004 c1 51EternalTimexX
that s really something to think about so im off to do that right now... review somemore of my stuff and ill review more of urs...
8/12/2004 c1 23vintage fade
You know... This is good. I like how you end lines at certain spots and don't really follow the standard way to write a poem. *smiles* I do that too. Good job. I liked it.
8/12/2004 c1 6unsmooth sympathy
Sounds very deep. I like it alot. It says 'Truths I would say' alot tho. Well that is the name of the poem ofocourse. lol
Oh and thanx for reading my poem. It's pretty much about words and how most of the time they are used to hurt people. But you have to remember words are just words weather they're good or bad. It was right after a fight with one of my friends. Not one of my best poems but i like it. You should read my other ones to i would epreciate it ^_^
Any way great poem i think i'll read your other one now ^_^
8/12/2004 c1 Ephemeral Seraphim
This is wonderful! It deep...thought-provoking...just like a master poet. Keep up the good work! Hasta luego!
8/11/2004 c1 18pacopuppy
wow, that was really good. i loved it. keep writing.
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