for The Road To Salvation Is Littered With Lies7/7/2005 c1 
4Missy N
This poem has a strangely beautiful questioning of faith involved in it. Your language is good, and flows nicely throughout the piece.
4Missy NThis poem has a strangely beautiful questioning of faith involved in it. Your language is good, and flows nicely throughout the piece.
8/3/2004 c1 242Coping Mechanism
This was good, but one thing about this piece... it is hard to understand exactly what you're talking about. Yes I understand that it is about you losing your faith, but what exactly made you lose your faith. Was it something to do with tragedies, and how God could allow such things? Was it about how sometimes it seems God abandons people in their time of need. I like this but The Empty Void was better, maybe cause I could relate to it so very much.
242Coping MechanismThis was good, but one thing about this piece... it is hard to understand exactly what you're talking about. Yes I understand that it is about you losing your faith, but what exactly made you lose your faith. Was it something to do with tragedies, and how God could allow such things? Was it about how sometimes it seems God abandons people in their time of need. I like this but The Empty Void was better, maybe cause I could relate to it so very much.