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8/4/2005 c1 64Tatsu the Blade Star
Sometimes I wish I could go back to those carefree days, but as you pointed out here, they arent always so carefree. So where to go to hide in innocence? I like this one a lot!
3/25/2005 c1 25Munchin
you are right.. what happened to love? what happened to peace? what happened to trust.. What happened?
8/4/2004 c1 Anime Freakizoid
that is so true, but i guess we'll all never understand why some people do the stupidest things to get what they want. but very touching and totally inspiring!
-anime freakizoid X^_^X
8/4/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
The world through the eyes of children is generally beautiful.. It is heartbreaking when that view is tainted. You captured that well.
8/4/2004 c1 suzieque2
Well said. You should write more about what you grew up with, not in poetry form but essay. We all come from different backgrounds and its interesting to read someone elses "story"

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