for Your move4/29/2003 c1 
48Gutter Rat
Well, you reviewed a bunch of my stuff, so I thought I might try reviewing some of yours. I thought this was pretty good. Your portrayal of Satan was swell, in my opinion. I would use the Bible as a source of inspiration for material, but the damn thing is so long and boring. I've never gotten past Eve eating the fruit...
48Gutter RatWell, you reviewed a bunch of my stuff, so I thought I might try reviewing some of yours. I thought this was pretty good. Your portrayal of Satan was swell, in my opinion. I would use the Bible as a source of inspiration for material, but the damn thing is so long and boring. I've never gotten past Eve eating the fruit...
3/7/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Wow, this is interesting. I do like it, yes I do. And no, I'm not offended. I don't see why anyone would be. Keep writing.
~CT
PS: Please ask me your questions in email next time. I hate doing it in reviews.
43Carter TachikawaWow, this is interesting. I do like it, yes I do. And no, I'm not offended. I don't see why anyone would be. Keep writing.
~CT
PS: Please ask me your questions in email next time. I hate doing it in reviews.
3/9/2002 c1 Link of Shadow
Though i am an atheist, interesting! He is the lightbringer, the bringer of humanity's light! mwah!
Though i am an atheist, interesting! He is the lightbringer, the bringer of humanity's light! mwah!
1/3/2002 c1 Dark Nation2
That was pretty neato! Very well-written. Thanks for reviewing my fic, by the way.
That was pretty neato! Very well-written. Thanks for reviewing my fic, by the way.
12/25/2001 c1 Leby2001
okay,mayB there is a reason that i am being mean. u were complaining about the HDM fic with the whole africa thing, u can't bother me w/ things like that and ruin a pefectly good fic. that is y i am going too a bunch of ur fics and leaving reviews of my opinion. but i will stop, i will NOT stoop to the level of sum of the brats @ my school and seek revenge. and i apologise, just don't bother me w/ details N E more.
okay,mayB there is a reason that i am being mean. u were complaining about the HDM fic with the whole africa thing, u can't bother me w/ things like that and ruin a pefectly good fic. that is y i am going too a bunch of ur fics and leaving reviews of my opinion. but i will stop, i will NOT stoop to the level of sum of the brats @ my school and seek revenge. and i apologise, just don't bother me w/ details N E more.
12/13/2001 c1 3KirjavaLyra
Good story. Thank you for reviewing mine, and I do have a reason for killing Pan and Lyra that will come up later in the story. I'll also explain more about the Earthquake. One person remarked that they don't have Earthquakes in Englang, but they do. Just not as often as where I live. We have an earthquake at least once a month, but no one dies. This was a really great story. Did Lucifer just creat humans? I agree that it's not really for religious people, but since I'm not one, I like it. Thank you for writing this story.
3KirjavaLyraGood story. Thank you for reviewing mine, and I do have a reason for killing Pan and Lyra that will come up later in the story. I'll also explain more about the Earthquake. One person remarked that they don't have Earthquakes in Englang, but they do. Just not as often as where I live. We have an earthquake at least once a month, but no one dies. This was a really great story. Did Lucifer just creat humans? I agree that it's not really for religious people, but since I'm not one, I like it. Thank you for writing this story.
6/27/2001 c1 11ArwenAria18
Interesting. You reviewed my Holy, so I thought I'd return the favor... I try to do that to everyone who reviews, though sometimes I run out of time. I know you said this one was not for religious people, but all your other stories were about things I know not of, so I hope this doesn't offend you that a "religious" person is reviewing. Not that I think of myself that way. Anyway, I thought this was rather original, and I liked your portrayal of "Mother Earth", so to speak. The characters for God and Satan were also original, even if your portrayal of God was off. However, there are too many facets to Him for any of us to be able to portray Him correctly. So whether or not I agree with the plot, your story was well-written. An interesting concept, a well thought out piece of fiction. Since this is getting absurdly long, I'd like to ask about the review you put for Holy: if you get the time, e-mail me at and tell me a little more about what you think. Your review was intriguing. Why do you find it hard to believe in one God, for instance? Maybe I'd even be able to answer some of your questions. I don't pretend to be all-knowing, but I can try. Anyway, E-mail me sometime if you get the chance. Thanks for reviewing my poem. :) -ArwenAria18
11ArwenAria18Interesting. You reviewed my Holy, so I thought I'd return the favor... I try to do that to everyone who reviews, though sometimes I run out of time. I know you said this one was not for religious people, but all your other stories were about things I know not of, so I hope this doesn't offend you that a "religious" person is reviewing. Not that I think of myself that way. Anyway, I thought this was rather original, and I liked your portrayal of "Mother Earth", so to speak. The characters for God and Satan were also original, even if your portrayal of God was off. However, there are too many facets to Him for any of us to be able to portray Him correctly. So whether or not I agree with the plot, your story was well-written. An interesting concept, a well thought out piece of fiction. Since this is getting absurdly long, I'd like to ask about the review you put for Holy: if you get the time, e-mail me at and tell me a little more about what you think. Your review was intriguing. Why do you find it hard to believe in one God, for instance? Maybe I'd even be able to answer some of your questions. I don't pretend to be all-knowing, but I can try. Anyway, E-mail me sometime if you get the chance. Thanks for reviewing my poem. :) -ArwenAria18
4/25/2001 c1 Reine-Sombre Ashaka
Hmmm... Very interesting... Humans did come from apes! Poor Gaia... You make Satan sound even more cooler!
Hmmm... Very interesting... Humans did come from apes! Poor Gaia... You make Satan sound even more cooler!
5/5/2000 c1 Dart Darth
It's a very interesting idea. I like it, and I'm sure Enekork will LOVE it :-)
It's a very interesting idea. I like it, and I'm sure Enekork will LOVE it :-)