for Tag2/7/2005 c1 
28One Up
All I can say is WOW. I LOVE your imagery in this. It is intoxicating and subtle at the same time. Marvelous. (Btw, that spelling error of mine is INDEED a spelling error. Too lazy to fix it! :p Ah, well.)
Again, beautiful piece of work here.
28One UpAll I can say is WOW. I LOVE your imagery in this. It is intoxicating and subtle at the same time. Marvelous. (Btw, that spelling error of mine is INDEED a spelling error. Too lazy to fix it! :p Ah, well.)
Again, beautiful piece of work here.
8/30/2004 c1 do not resuscitate
i wrote a poem called 'transcendence' that i have since removed, but this is so much like it, it's scary. my penname used to be 'cough syrup kisses.' i'm hoping that this is just a very strange coincedence, but i wanted to ask you about it.
i wrote a poem called 'transcendence' that i have since removed, but this is so much like it, it's scary. my penname used to be 'cough syrup kisses.' i'm hoping that this is just a very strange coincedence, but i wanted to ask you about it.
8/6/2004 c1 19la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent
somewhat reminiscent of something coughsyrupkisses wrote, but i love it. great imagery.
19la nuit mes yeux t'eclairentsomewhat reminiscent of something coughsyrupkisses wrote, but i love it. great imagery.
8/6/2004 c1 84Escapist
I lovelovelove this poem. Everything about it. So much that I'm having a hard time speaking in full sentences.
The way that this was written I find just amazing and mesmerizing. I particularly like the line about the bright pink lollipop stuck in her hair, because it's relatable to me, as sad as that is. Most people stop getting things stuck in their hair in their elementary school days, but I never grew out of it.
This is beautiful. Really. And I'm sorry if this was a horrible review.
84EscapistI lovelovelove this poem. Everything about it. So much that I'm having a hard time speaking in full sentences.
The way that this was written I find just amazing and mesmerizing. I particularly like the line about the bright pink lollipop stuck in her hair, because it's relatable to me, as sad as that is. Most people stop getting things stuck in their hair in their elementary school days, but I never grew out of it.
This is beautiful. Really. And I'm sorry if this was a horrible review.