9/18/2012 c32 3alexisrenee
OH GOD.
I'm squealing and laughing and crying at the same time! SO SWEET! SO ADORABLE! SO TOUCHING! God, my heart is melting! Thank you for writing this amazing story!
OH GOD.
I'm squealing and laughing and crying at the same time! SO SWEET! SO ADORABLE! SO TOUCHING! God, my heart is melting! Thank you for writing this amazing story!
8/25/2012 c32 AnonymousReads
Great complicated story, i was definetly not expecting this and kyles character seemed to change from the beggining where he had elva and shelby tied up and wanted to more than kiss suggestively against her will to the guy not wanting to take her innocence to guy who must always do it with her. Great story. :)
Great complicated story, i was definetly not expecting this and kyles character seemed to change from the beggining where he had elva and shelby tied up and wanted to more than kiss suggestively against her will to the guy not wanting to take her innocence to guy who must always do it with her. Great story. :)
5/12/2012 c1 3xDangerousLovex
I'm very excited to see where this story goes. Can't wait to finish it!
I'm very excited to see where this story goes. Can't wait to finish it!
3/11/2012 c32 Gnostic
After sitting through your entire story...you don't tell us who killed Evan or how the custody battle went? Did you forget that you introduced those issues?
After sitting through your entire story...you don't tell us who killed Evan or how the custody battle went? Did you forget that you introduced those issues?
2/17/2012 c32 hahehohihu
i only just stumbled across this and all the reviews are from 2009 :P but this is absolutely amazing, i fell in love with it! im so sad its over D:
i only just stumbled across this and all the reviews are from 2009 :P but this is absolutely amazing, i fell in love with it! im so sad its over D:
5/17/2011 c32 Boredstarburts
Loved this story =]
Loved this story =]
4/9/2011 c32 Rosedreamer101
this story was absolutely adorable ! you deserve x4 more reviews than you have right now ! i love this story. Amazing work !
this story was absolutely adorable ! you deserve x4 more reviews than you have right now ! i love this story. Amazing work !
9/5/2010 c32 Barbie826
To be honest the beginning was iffy. And the whole stepbrother thing was not something I wanted to read about. I can't stand that angle or things like that. And the whole them kidnapping people and her in an alley seemed so far fetched and it was kind of ridiculous. But I decided to keep reading and I'm glad I did! Because your writing got SO much better, and the story got better too. Thank goodness no more of that Jed being in love with her crap. I loved her and Kyle and their love. You really improved! And I'm glad I read your story.
To be honest the beginning was iffy. And the whole stepbrother thing was not something I wanted to read about. I can't stand that angle or things like that. And the whole them kidnapping people and her in an alley seemed so far fetched and it was kind of ridiculous. But I decided to keep reading and I'm glad I did! Because your writing got SO much better, and the story got better too. Thank goodness no more of that Jed being in love with her crap. I loved her and Kyle and their love. You really improved! And I'm glad I read your story.
7/28/2010 c32 rugvbkh799
This was a wonderful story, however what happened to Jessica?
Huggles & Cheers,
Mi
This was a wonderful story, however what happened to Jessica?
Huggles & Cheers,
Mi
7/27/2010 c1 SootyKiwi
Elva has a awesome sharp tongue nice job on insulting Lebrun asshole hehe. Lebrun is cool but his personality is a total cock
Elva has a awesome sharp tongue nice job on insulting Lebrun asshole hehe. Lebrun is cool but his personality is a total cock
11/17/2009 c32 1HeartsOfDiamonds
Amazing story. This is probably one of the best stories on the website. Good job.
Amazing story. This is probably one of the best stories on the website. Good job.