for Blinded by Love8/26/2004 c6 
14Ace Of Spades8
OMGosh! I cried. That's so sad. It was great though. It explains everything in perfect sense. Poeple always seem to want to blame theirselves first. I know, I've been in a situation like this. I think it's great how you get across to the readers that it's not their fault and they need to get out of it right away because it can get worse very fast. It doesn't always take three or four times before they really get mean. Sometimes it can be the first or second. I love how you got that point across. Very sad. Very true. Awesome story.
14Ace Of Spades8OMGosh! I cried. That's so sad. It was great though. It explains everything in perfect sense. Poeple always seem to want to blame theirselves first. I know, I've been in a situation like this. I think it's great how you get across to the readers that it's not their fault and they need to get out of it right away because it can get worse very fast. It doesn't always take three or four times before they really get mean. Sometimes it can be the first or second. I love how you got that point across. Very sad. Very true. Awesome story.
8/25/2004 c7 marianne
^^ Great storie...can't say that I like Landon much though 'cuz it juz sounds like he aint that grate a boyfrend. Wun thing u can work on would be your dialogues 'cuz itz juz talkin n derez 0 action. Othr than that, good job.
^^ Great storie...can't say that I like Landon much though 'cuz it juz sounds like he aint that grate a boyfrend. Wun thing u can work on would be your dialogues 'cuz itz juz talkin n derez 0 action. Othr than that, good job.
8/16/2004 c7 A Panda
You're kute and the story rocks =) Keep it up =P
You're kute and the story rocks =) Keep it up =P
8/12/2004 c1 Haz Almighty
Hi, only read da 1st chapter im in a bit of a rush lol, love it. Simple, nice descriptions and u know whats going on and who is who. cool ill read the search and the rest of this another day lol.
Haz Almighty x
P.s thanks 4 reviewing mine!
Hi, only read da 1st chapter im in a bit of a rush lol, love it. Simple, nice descriptions and u know whats going on and who is who. cool ill read the search and the rest of this another day lol.
Haz Almighty x
P.s thanks 4 reviewing mine!
8/4/2004 c3 13Angel-in-a-dark-corner
I think you got the actions of an abused teenager very correct and I think I like Leslie, she seems very caring and kind, good chapter! I'll read the rest tommorow got to go watch Inuyasha.
Always,
Angel_in_a_dark_corner
13Angel-in-a-dark-cornerI think you got the actions of an abused teenager very correct and I think I like Leslie, she seems very caring and kind, good chapter! I'll read the rest tommorow got to go watch Inuyasha.
Always,
Angel_in_a_dark_corner
8/4/2004 c2 Angel-in-a-dark-corner
Hey good chapter, I disike Landon thoug, and you might want to be just a little more discriptive on your writing, I like it though, anyway, I know this sounds really pathetic, but will you R&R my story Fairy Tale(Revised)I know it sounds pathetic and stupid, but I think you'll like it and I'm interested on your feed back. Good story!
Always.
Angel_in_a_dark_corner
Hey good chapter, I disike Landon thoug, and you might want to be just a little more discriptive on your writing, I like it though, anyway, I know this sounds really pathetic, but will you R&R my story Fairy Tale(Revised)I know it sounds pathetic and stupid, but I think you'll like it and I'm interested on your feed back. Good story!
Always.
Angel_in_a_dark_corner
8/4/2004 c1 Angel-in-a-dark-corner
I like the summary so I can't wait to read more oh and I like that the sisters are so nice to eachother, I wished my sister was like that, oh well, sounds good.
Always'
Angel_in_a_dark_corner
I like the summary so I can't wait to read more oh and I like that the sisters are so nice to eachother, I wished my sister was like that, oh well, sounds good.
Always'
Angel_in_a_dark_corner