for Caged8/6/2005 c1 
24Sarah-Brighteyes
Reminds me of pirates and wars that are better left un-fought because they are a waste of time.
Just my initial thoughts. I thought this was very well written though. Dark and yet you could feel tossed in the emotions. Dramatically done.
Bravo
24Sarah-BrighteyesReminds me of pirates and wars that are better left un-fought because they are a waste of time.
Just my initial thoughts. I thought this was very well written though. Dark and yet you could feel tossed in the emotions. Dramatically done.
Bravo
3/22/2005 c1 26Cadience Gemma Topaz
I like this poem and i love the imagrey, u might like some of my stuff, are u up north, south or in the middle(east coast) Im Middle! And in a very boring state!
26Cadience Gemma TopazI like this poem and i love the imagrey, u might like some of my stuff, are u up north, south or in the middle(east coast) Im Middle! And in a very boring state!
2/21/2005 c1 22Scarlett Rose Assassin
Awesome. Wish I could say something constructive. Actually, I can: Write more. ^_^
22Scarlett Rose AssassinAwesome. Wish I could say something constructive. Actually, I can: Write more. ^_^
9/16/2004 c1 10Anglachel67
i nearly drowned once, a summer ago, but there was no blood involved, thank goodness. very interesting poem, a slight bit short, but otherwise fantastic. great job.
10Anglachel67i nearly drowned once, a summer ago, but there was no blood involved, thank goodness. very interesting poem, a slight bit short, but otherwise fantastic. great job.
8/5/2004 c1 111Crimson-Fantasy
very nice peice it is short maybe you could add on it wouldn't be to bad i don't know your choice
111Crimson-Fantasyvery nice peice it is short maybe you could add on it wouldn't be to bad i don't know your choice
8/5/2004 c1 123GothicSpook
I like it! It really does bring out the fear of drowning and has wonderful imagry! Well done!
123GothicSpookI like it! It really does bring out the fear of drowning and has wonderful imagry! Well done!
8/5/2004 c1 72Earthbound Angel 49
very grafic, adn i mean that in a good way. It not only prtrays the feeling of desperation but the actual fear of drowning.
-Ebony
72Earthbound Angel 49very grafic, adn i mean that in a good way. It not only prtrays the feeling of desperation but the actual fear of drowning.
-Ebony