for Reminiscence
8/5/2004 c1
83xLectaVery nice. Wonderful word choices, idea, and format.
8/5/2004 c1
191nine ironThe worth of saying it is a former love poem is of such importance when I read the passage you spilled onto the page I feel it is fated for the title. Doing such will increase impact as it adds the extra bite to punch this poem into ones lost-to-non-reality thoughts.
8/5/2004 c1
1k+Faithless Julietcool, its kind of whimsical almost, kep up the good work.
Juliet.