
1/30/2005 c12
10pecado
lol. writer's block... yeah, that happens to everyone. you've got a wonderful collection of haikus here! love them.
-your pecado-

lol. writer's block... yeah, that happens to everyone. you've got a wonderful collection of haikus here! love them.
-your pecado-
8/15/2004 c10
29KhalidahTiaret
This is my favorite.. I love them all, though!
Again, beautiful work.
~KT

This is my favorite.. I love them all, though!
Again, beautiful work.
~KT
8/9/2004 c6 LuthienLuin
I love Chopin! I play piano and really appreciated this haiku, you can feel the ebb and flow of the waltz. And thank you for reviewing me!
I love Chopin! I play piano and really appreciated this haiku, you can feel the ebb and flow of the waltz. And thank you for reviewing me!
8/9/2004 c10
127Eirien
Lovely and touching. I love the sweet, tentative offer of love expressed here, I can relate. The "if you allow me" nicely frames the poem as the prereqisite on which the love depends. Beautiful piece.

Lovely and touching. I love the sweet, tentative offer of love expressed here, I can relate. The "if you allow me" nicely frames the poem as the prereqisite on which the love depends. Beautiful piece.
8/9/2004 c7 Eirien
Wow. This is the strongest one so far. Very effective, great surprise effect in the last line. Awesome poem.
Wow. This is the strongest one so far. Very effective, great surprise effect in the last line. Awesome poem.
8/9/2004 c5 Eirien
Very inventive, I like the unusual idea in this, that our artificial lights outshine the stars, and I like the kind of negative evaluation of that coming in in the last line.
Very inventive, I like the unusual idea in this, that our artificial lights outshine the stars, and I like the kind of negative evaluation of that coming in in the last line.
8/9/2004 c3 Eirien
I like the perspective, looking through the glass into the inside of other houses (as well as out of one's own?). Nice atmosphere and message. ;-)
I like the perspective, looking through the glass into the inside of other houses (as well as out of one's own?). Nice atmosphere and message. ;-)
8/9/2004 c1 Eirien
Beautiful. I like the ways this can be read on a literal as well as a metaphorical level, how small actions/ things can set a lot into motion and have a huge effect. Lovely piece.
Beautiful. I like the ways this can be read on a literal as well as a metaphorical level, how small actions/ things can set a lot into motion and have a huge effect. Lovely piece.