for Hungover In You9/22/2004 c1 
12Sugar On The Asphalt
I just can't stop reading these. I want a collection in my shelf and the words upon my wall; you, dearest, are tremendously gifted.
12Sugar On The AsphaltI just can't stop reading these. I want a collection in my shelf and the words upon my wall; you, dearest, are tremendously gifted.
9/12/2004 c1 ylem
/as drunk as if the answering machine
were drenched in a
mimosa/
IMO those are the best 3 lines, if I had to choose. This is a fabulous poem...I could really see the eyes reflecting over the bridge. Kind of a sleepless-in-Seattle feel to it, if you pardon the rather insipid movie & just keep the insomnia part. Love it.
/as drunk as if the answering machine
were drenched in a
mimosa/
IMO those are the best 3 lines, if I had to choose. This is a fabulous poem...I could really see the eyes reflecting over the bridge. Kind of a sleepless-in-Seattle feel to it, if you pardon the rather insipid movie & just keep the insomnia part. Love it.
9/5/2004 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
Wow...don't know how to review this one...I guess I could use the same word to describe this as you used to describe mine: "refreshing." And I don't know why, but I took that as a huge compliment when I read your review, I really appreciated it. This poem's going on my favorites list. Deffinitely.
~A. Person
55APersonAndAHalfWow...don't know how to review this one...I guess I could use the same word to describe this as you used to describe mine: "refreshing." And I don't know why, but I took that as a huge compliment when I read your review, I really appreciated it. This poem's going on my favorites list. Deffinitely.
~A. Person
8/27/2004 c1 do not resuscitate
so pretty and abrtract. painted beautiful pictures of love and booze in my mind. :)
so pretty and abrtract. painted beautiful pictures of love and booze in my mind. :)
8/9/2004 c1 67Paste on Smile
Absolutely wonderful. Your writing technique is beautiful. Very cynical...very choppy, but it fits perfectly.
67Paste on SmileAbsolutely wonderful. Your writing technique is beautiful. Very cynical...very choppy, but it fits perfectly.