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11Poetrybay
this sounds so good it's a new year please update soon. i would like to know is ahe going to fine true love at the end because you're leaving me in suspense please update soon. in yes you should continue this, this is really good i might add please let me know if you're going to update soon.
11Poetrybaythis sounds so good it's a new year please update soon. i would like to know is ahe going to fine true love at the end because you're leaving me in suspense please update soon. in yes you should continue this, this is really good i might add please let me know if you're going to update soon.
10/26/2004 c1 6AGermaine
Good start to a story! Do update soon, i'm very interested to know about Dakota and Calvin (:
6AGermaineGood start to a story! Do update soon, i'm very interested to know about Dakota and Calvin (:
9/10/2004 c1 Guest
That's a great beginning. You have me intrigued. Now update soon so I can find out more about Dakota.
That's a great beginning. You have me intrigued. Now update soon so I can find out more about Dakota.
9/10/2004 c1 Matt91
That was a great first chapter! Calvin is so evil! How could he do that to Dakota? She's his wife, not his doormat! Yes, I want you to continue! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
That was a great first chapter! Calvin is so evil! How could he do that to Dakota? She's his wife, not his doormat! Yes, I want you to continue! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
8/23/2004 c1 bklyangel
cant wait to see where this is going
cant wait to see where this is going
8/17/2004 c1 16kaika switched
Aw, I want you to continue! I really like Dakota so far and her little issue with Calvin seems like a good plot-line. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedAw, I want you to continue! I really like Dakota so far and her little issue with Calvin seems like a good plot-line. Keep writing!
8/8/2004 c1 1The Heartbreak Mixtape
this is really wonderful.and i hope you continue it.it's something i can relate to.
1The Heartbreak Mixtapethis is really wonderful.and i hope you continue it.it's something i can relate to.
8/8/2004 c1 TiGeR-BaBe1989
love it so far! i hope you do something about that ex! well cant wait until your next update! hope you update sooner rather then later!
love it so far! i hope you do something about that ex! well cant wait until your next update! hope you update sooner rather then later!
8/8/2004 c1 13BellezAzul
YAY! I am so glad that you finally got this story going. LoL Even though I read it first, but ya know! LoL UPDATE SOON... lets kick Dakota's ex's butt... right now!
13BellezAzulYAY! I am so glad that you finally got this story going. LoL Even though I read it first, but ya know! LoL UPDATE SOON... lets kick Dakota's ex's butt... right now!
8/6/2004 c1 3Ayn is not Ann
Ciao ragazza!
I really like this story, and I'm not just saying that because I know you, I really do like it. I can't wait to find out what happens next! And yes, I am working on updating my story. Sheesh...you two are worse than slave drivers. :D
Oh, and Diego says that he knows you'll uphold the honor of his car in your story because if you don't, Killa will decapatate you. lol...how nice.
3Ayn is not AnnCiao ragazza!
I really like this story, and I'm not just saying that because I know you, I really do like it. I can't wait to find out what happens next! And yes, I am working on updating my story. Sheesh...you two are worse than slave drivers. :D
Oh, and Diego says that he knows you'll uphold the honor of his car in your story because if you don't, Killa will decapatate you. lol...how nice.
8/6/2004 c1 punkrockprincess900
awesome so far...keep it up
awesome so far...keep it up
8/6/2004 c1 jaslovessean
I love it! Keep it coming!
I love it! Keep it coming!
8/6/2004 c1 3Kalanu Citlali
Woo hoo! I love this story already, but I kinda have an inside scoop on the whole thing, so I'm very biased. :D
I want to thank you for using 'the name'. I can't tell you how much it means to me. It's almost like I'm confessing to the world how bad of a person the real guy was. It's also kinda interesting how you didn't even know that happened to me, you just asked me for a name. :D In the words of our beloved Ayn; 'Strange shit happens.' Keep up the good work!
3Kalanu CitlaliWoo hoo! I love this story already, but I kinda have an inside scoop on the whole thing, so I'm very biased. :D
I want to thank you for using 'the name'. I can't tell you how much it means to me. It's almost like I'm confessing to the world how bad of a person the real guy was. It's also kinda interesting how you didn't even know that happened to me, you just asked me for a name. :D In the words of our beloved Ayn; 'Strange shit happens.' Keep up the good work!