for The Siren8/10/2004 c1 
53emrldeyedragon
Aw, its cute! ^_^ Sirens are amusing, good job! (sorry it took me so long to read this...)
53emrldeyedragonAw, its cute! ^_^ Sirens are amusing, good job! (sorry it took me so long to read this...)
8/8/2004 c1 Man
Hah..?
Nice poem, not funny though. Unless you have no understand of the word "Humour". Regardless, its a nice poem, good work.
Hah..?
Nice poem, not funny though. Unless you have no understand of the word "Humour". Regardless, its a nice poem, good work.
8/7/2004 c1 Froggy
Me likes. A little off on the rhythm sometimes, could probably eliminate an extra 'the' or something, but nice imagery, esp. 'her hair spun-through with fire' that line stays with me.
Me likes. A little off on the rhythm sometimes, could probably eliminate an extra 'the' or something, but nice imagery, esp. 'her hair spun-through with fire' that line stays with me.