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6/7/2005 c3 3Ballerina with a Gun
Wow! This is so interesting! I think you should add more adjectives and not put everything out there so abruptly - build the mystery, the suspense. But altogether, it is a good story. Update?
8/29/2004 c2 5Battle Raven
OHH! YOU DEDICATED THIS TO ME! OH! I LOVE YOU! ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU!
A legend begins...how prophetic, so intriguing...Keep it up, oh great and powerful authoress!
8/29/2004 c2 36FantasyWriter923
This story is really good! I can't wait to read more! Keep going!
8/21/2004 c1 5Battle Raven
Tis really interesting! I like it. I love the title 'specially, it's so...captivating. Update!
~Maire Macha, Battle Raven
8/19/2004 c1 24sparrowsredrose
Quite an interesting start-I'd like to see more. Maybe you could slow down a bit, and not say everything so directly. :) Pretty good so far!
Keep it up!
~sparrowsredrose
8/7/2004 c1 36FantasyWriter923
This seems like it is going to be a good story. Write more!
8/6/2004 c1 16Minus the Bear
Wow! You really got my attention! Write more, more, MORE!

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