for Velocity Star Yet Another Revised Edition12/22/2004 c2 
14biminator
hmm. I liked the first chapter better than the second. It seemed more converstaional, more interesting. This was, however, MUCH much better than "Rebels". update soon.
14biminatorhmm. I liked the first chapter better than the second. It seemed more converstaional, more interesting. This was, however, MUCH much better than "Rebels". update soon.
8/7/2004 c1 23BlackCat Hanyou
I like this, its much better than the other one of it you've got up.
I want more!
so long
BlackCat Hanyou-chan
23BlackCat HanyouI like this, its much better than the other one of it you've got up.
I want more!
so long
BlackCat Hanyou-chan