for Freak Girl6/24/2005 c22 
5Dreamz4h2
hey mez1as we're not in college together now and won't be seeing each other like until after three months i guess you won't get me hassling you to hurry uo and put up your next chapter!
this was a great chapter just what a girl would do when she's just been with the guy of her dreams.
nice chapter to come back to. please update soon
and oh yeah - this does so fit in with M10. LOL!
hahahahahaha
byemiss ya loads
5Dreamz4h2hey mez1as we're not in college together now and won't be seeing each other like until after three months i guess you won't get me hassling you to hurry uo and put up your next chapter!
this was a great chapter just what a girl would do when she's just been with the guy of her dreams.
nice chapter to come back to. please update soon
and oh yeah - this does so fit in with M10. LOL!
hahahahahaha
byemiss ya loads
6/23/2005 c22 K.S
HEY YOU ALWAYS DO THAT DON'T YOU WHENEVER SOMEONE GETS INTO YOUR STORY YOU ENDING WITH SUSPICION.ANYWAY WHEN ARE WE GOING TO FIND OUT WHAT TOMMY IS BACK FOR? TAKE CARE K.S.P.S.IT'S A GOOD WAY TO FIND OUT WHAT IS HAPEENING IN YOUR LIFE! (LOL)
HEY YOU ALWAYS DO THAT DON'T YOU WHENEVER SOMEONE GETS INTO YOUR STORY YOU ENDING WITH SUSPICION.ANYWAY WHEN ARE WE GOING TO FIND OUT WHAT TOMMY IS BACK FOR? TAKE CARE K.S.P.S.IT'S A GOOD WAY TO FIND OUT WHAT IS HAPEENING IN YOUR LIFE! (LOL)
6/23/2005 c20 K.S
HEY THIS HAS TO BE THE FUNNIEST CHAPTERI HAVE READ! YOU HAVE SOME GREAT IDEAA PITY THRY MATCH WITH TOUR OWN LIFE. YOU KNOW WHAT IT IS A GOOD AWAY OF EXPRESSING YOUR LOVE TO SOMEONE! ANY WAY MEZ HOPE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS UPDATED SON. TAKE CARE! K.S
HEY THIS HAS TO BE THE FUNNIEST CHAPTERI HAVE READ! YOU HAVE SOME GREAT IDEAA PITY THRY MATCH WITH TOUR OWN LIFE. YOU KNOW WHAT IT IS A GOOD AWAY OF EXPRESSING YOUR LOVE TO SOMEONE! ANY WAY MEZ HOPE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS UPDATED SON. TAKE CARE! K.S
6/23/2005 c22 sameera
hey mez
thank god for updating this i sreally good chapter well done
hope u update soon
i hope u did well in your examz
seya
hey mez
thank god for updating this i sreally good chapter well done
hope u update soon
i hope u did well in your examz
seya
6/22/2005 c22 windowbreak
teeheeheehee keep going! ur not gonna loose me as a reviewer
teeheeheehee keep going! ur not gonna loose me as a reviewer
6/22/2005 c22 Chez44
Yay! your back. great update, i'm so excited to see you writing again. can't wait to see how the date goes with connor and how the story evoles in regards to beth and damon. what about lucy. too many things to think about, looking forward to the next chapter...
Yay! your back. great update, i'm so excited to see you writing again. can't wait to see how the date goes with connor and how the story evoles in regards to beth and damon. what about lucy. too many things to think about, looking forward to the next chapter...
6/22/2005 c2 Breakfastinbed
Three things; First of all, STOP OVERUSING THE WORD; "Whilst" Heh heh! It's an occasional word, not an actual...ugh. You're just over using it. You had it like, three times in one of your paragraphs! Second; Ha ha, when I picture conner, I see him as looking like Harry potter w/out the glasses, lol. But, hey, harry's hot, so I guess that works. Third; What the hell are 'bosom buddies'? Bosom's another word for breasts, so that would imply...kinship...and if you applied that to this situation...incest. Ya. Gross... o_0 odder than dat, I like it.
Three things; First of all, STOP OVERUSING THE WORD; "Whilst" Heh heh! It's an occasional word, not an actual...ugh. You're just over using it. You had it like, three times in one of your paragraphs! Second; Ha ha, when I picture conner, I see him as looking like Harry potter w/out the glasses, lol. But, hey, harry's hot, so I guess that works. Third; What the hell are 'bosom buddies'? Bosom's another word for breasts, so that would imply...kinship...and if you applied that to this situation...incest. Ya. Gross... o_0 odder than dat, I like it.
6/22/2005 c1 breakfastinbed
She wakes up at eight to go to school? What dream world do you live in? I wake up at Five thirty! Neways, yeah. My cousin played the flute, she was really good at it. Then she got braces, and now she can't play at all...okay then. Nice story
She wakes up at eight to go to school? What dream world do you live in? I wake up at Five thirty! Neways, yeah. My cousin played the flute, she was really good at it. Then she got braces, and now she can't play at all...okay then. Nice story
4/27/2005 c21 C. Regeling
I love reading this, its interesting that she is a ghost seer...though i think they are called soul seers...
i'm confused as to why all of a sudden two of the most "popular" boys in school have 'fallen' for two of the "freaks" of the school...
still it makes an interesting story...
Cant wait til you get back to read more of this,
Jorja : )
I love reading this, its interesting that she is a ghost seer...though i think they are called soul seers...
i'm confused as to why all of a sudden two of the most "popular" boys in school have 'fallen' for two of the "freaks" of the school...
still it makes an interesting story...
Cant wait til you get back to read more of this,
Jorja : )
4/18/2005 c21 5Dreamz4h2
Hey Mez1, just want to say that even though you're leaving us at a wicked point in the story, I can't wait until you update. This story is the coolest.Anyways good luck with your exams hope you pass with flying colours. Lol!
See Ya! (in a bit at lunchtime) lol!
XIshahX
5Dreamz4h2Hey Mez1, just want to say that even though you're leaving us at a wicked point in the story, I can't wait until you update. This story is the coolest.Anyways good luck with your exams hope you pass with flying colours. Lol!
See Ya! (in a bit at lunchtime) lol!
XIshahX
4/16/2005 c21 tibs
hey mez i just wanted to say that your story is brill and i cant wait til you up date, i wana know wat happens next tibs x
hey mez i just wanted to say that your story is brill and i cant wait til you up date, i wana know wat happens next tibs x
4/16/2005 c21 5GhostSmilez
i want to say that im sad you wont be updating for a while, but i love your story. Its really good. So im gonna wait till you come back and read more. I read the whole thing to day, and want to say GOOD JOB, youre a talented writer. Good luck with your exams. -ghost
5GhostSmilezi want to say that im sad you wont be updating for a while, but i love your story. Its really good. So im gonna wait till you come back and read more. I read the whole thing to day, and want to say GOOD JOB, youre a talented writer. Good luck with your exams. -ghost