for What They Didn't Know8/14/2005 c2 
10Risa the Moon
i really hope that you write more to this story. i would really like to read more of it.
10Risa the Mooni really hope that you write more to this story. i would really like to read more of it.
8/11/2004 c2 2epephany
heeyya, im on the run at the mo coz mums calling fo dinner n i got a pile of stuff to get thru, but im taking the time out coz u r so swet fo reviewing my story AND giving me a shout out.
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i like how things r progressing, desi sounds so sweet. I was expecting another dustan "incident" but mayb that woulda been overdone- good job avoiding that. Throw in another twist somewhere! the story has the gr8est potential for it, Lonnie is so sweet & Thane is so smitten
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Im so happy u liked my story, coz ur soo accomplished- im just getting strted. Cleo is in trouble, but i gatta figure out somefin...expect surprises in the nxt chappie
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i gtg, keep writing! ill look out fo ur 3rd if u lookout fo mine! :P:P il look out neway
thanks fo the shout, ill giv u one too
luv hammer girl
2epephanyheeyya, im on the run at the mo coz mums calling fo dinner n i got a pile of stuff to get thru, but im taking the time out coz u r so swet fo reviewing my story AND giving me a shout out.
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i like how things r progressing, desi sounds so sweet. I was expecting another dustan "incident" but mayb that woulda been overdone- good job avoiding that. Throw in another twist somewhere! the story has the gr8est potential for it, Lonnie is so sweet & Thane is so smitten
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Im so happy u liked my story, coz ur soo accomplished- im just getting strted. Cleo is in trouble, but i gatta figure out somefin...expect surprises in the nxt chappie
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i gtg, keep writing! ill look out fo ur 3rd if u lookout fo mine! :P:P il look out neway
thanks fo the shout, ill giv u one too
luv hammer girl
8/11/2004 c2 2NomadicWriter
aw that was just soo cute! i cant wait to read more, and dont forget to update - Babysiting Josh - im in love with both stories.. hehe! sorry to sound pushy... but yes im hooked.. to them al!
-Kate
2NomadicWriteraw that was just soo cute! i cant wait to read more, and dont forget to update - Babysiting Josh - im in love with both stories.. hehe! sorry to sound pushy... but yes im hooked.. to them al!
-Kate
8/10/2004 c2 Riley Blair
I'm not quite sure how I feel about Thane yet, but I have to say that I like Kari and Dustan and Alondra too. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm praying for a quick update!
I'm not quite sure how I feel about Thane yet, but I have to say that I like Kari and Dustan and Alondra too. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm praying for a quick update!
8/10/2004 c1 Riley Blair
This is an awesome story so far. When I read the summary I thought that this Desiree would be like a girlfriend or something.. I never thought of a daughter! ::Merrily skips on over to chapter two::
This is an awesome story so far. When I read the summary I thought that this Desiree would be like a girlfriend or something.. I never thought of a daughter! ::Merrily skips on over to chapter two::
8/10/2004 c2 13bipolar-magician
woo! u updated, hehe. awesome chappie, now update again! please and thank you : )
13bipolar-magicianwoo! u updated, hehe. awesome chappie, now update again! please and thank you : )
8/8/2004 c1 bipolar-magician
ahh! update! now! u better, this is an awesome beginning, so update! please and thank you : )
ahh! update! now! u better, this is an awesome beginning, so update! please and thank you : )
8/8/2004 c1 2NomadicWriter
That was a great start! and i cant wait to read more - you have me hooked..
-Kate
2NomadicWriterThat was a great start! and i cant wait to read more - you have me hooked..
-Kate
8/7/2004 c1 2epephany
WOW~! that was fab! absolutely ace. I already feel attached to Alondra and Thane, like theyre really god friends of mine n i want them to work this thru. Same w/ kari n Dustan. I cant believe you were able to put their history AND the whole night's events in their so smoothely. I mean WOW! it all worked so well, it was really good to read something that really is worth publishing (as in a book) ! I feel reealylyl close to the characters, it's set up so well. I WANT MORE DAMMIT! :P PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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ur really good so can u pls giv me some advice on my story? i jsut published it! thanx
lub hammer-girl:)
2epephanyWOW~! that was fab! absolutely ace. I already feel attached to Alondra and Thane, like theyre really god friends of mine n i want them to work this thru. Same w/ kari n Dustan. I cant believe you were able to put their history AND the whole night's events in their so smoothely. I mean WOW! it all worked so well, it was really good to read something that really is worth publishing (as in a book) ! I feel reealylyl close to the characters, it's set up so well. I WANT MORE DAMMIT! :P PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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ur really good so can u pls giv me some advice on my story? i jsut published it! thanx
lub hammer-girl:)
8/7/2004 c1 10proverbial bane
THis story's good. I just noticed it on the "Just In" collumn and noticed after I read that it was you. Cool. I don't like Thane.. :P I probly will eventually, but I feel sorry for Alondra. :( LoL. Update this baby so0n!
10proverbial baneTHis story's good. I just noticed it on the "Just In" collumn and noticed after I read that it was you. Cool. I don't like Thane.. :P I probly will eventually, but I feel sorry for Alondra. :( LoL. Update this baby so0n!