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9/16/2004 c1 MaiMo
hey! well i like all boy school storys related so i think i probably gonna like yours but please update soon cause since u have only one chap yet and its a short one its hard to give a opinion...i just think maybe u shud describe better becouse i can only guess what happened i mean she got in some class people start to yell at her and then she meet the guys but its kind ve blurry...just like i said update fast so i can have a opinion about it
ps:i really want to continue reading this cause im all for boys school storys..:P
ps2:dont mind my spelling mistakes cause english is not my language
9/7/2004 c1 Kashe
(too lazy to log in, sorry)
hey i like this and if u dont finish it i will...throw somthing at u. so finish. ple e e e ase? 4 me? :-P i want to be a charactor... my name can be bob this time. ya. i tell her my name and she goes what the...? or somethin. ya. ANYway. hopoe i get an author alert soon from you! for this story.
and the hurricane thing (ah, hurricanes. the evilness.) is not because of your story. its just something i'm fond of saying randomly. :-P well please update!
-me! (mememe! :-P)
8/23/2004 c1 59Ixel the Pixel
I really like this story and I think it's funny how she reacted to them chasing her. Please update soon!
8/22/2004 c1 6Myogenic
Good beginning. I like her reaction to being the only girl in the school, good humor. Pls udate soon! And thank you for the review!
p.s I'm still in Portugal which is why SelfConfidence hasn't been updated
8/8/2004 c1 2MarielleRay
um..i can tell already that this story has an interesting plot. but this chapter is kinda short..n it left me very confused in the end. the only things i got were that Elle was enrolled in an all boy school..that this guy saves her..n she makes a gay friend.
8/7/2004 c1 Perhonen
um the plot is good, this is a different idea and I like it, but it was very very confusing, actually I did't understand it, I think that you should have more description of events, people, plaves, thoughts, etc. oh and you don't have to explain yourself!, the A/N in any story are kind of annoying, I hope you improve in the next chappy coz the story is good
-nat
8/7/2004 c1 bibi-says
The pacing is too fast...things should be more explained and well everything just shouldn't all of a sudden happen. I found myself confused in a few places like when she was running...wat was that about? O_o well this can really be fine tuned in many places...slow your roll a bit eh? and whats with all those && that keep repeating it really breaks concentration,so do your authors notes. It seems like a good idea for a story but can really use some help overall rate 4/10. P.S. I am not trying to be a hater in fact i think that the overall topic is good just really needs more work.Plz don't start hating on me either

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