for Epiphany in You8/17/2004 c1 
1Clodhopper
very, very good. i liked it a lot. very well written. i could feel Jade's frustration. im curious to see how you will develop this.
~Mack and Ty.
if you have the time or are ever bored, would u mind reviewing one of ours? if you dont wish to, please dont feel pressured or...anything.
1Clodhoppervery, very good. i liked it a lot. very well written. i could feel Jade's frustration. im curious to see how you will develop this.
~Mack and Ty.
if you have the time or are ever bored, would u mind reviewing one of ours? if you dont wish to, please dont feel pressured or...anything.
8/8/2004 c1 24sparrowsredrose
I like the start of this! Great ideas...please continue!
~sparrowsredrose
24sparrowsredroseI like the start of this! Great ideas...please continue!
~sparrowsredrose