for Untitled11/29/2004 c1 Alalia
Definitely disturbing, although i'm not sure if that was the idea.
Definitely disturbing, although i'm not sure if that was the idea.
9/14/2004 c1 
5RedHairedWriter
Weird, but definatly not worst and If it is your lucky.
I like this one because it's so Intriguing. keep it up.
5RedHairedWriterWeird, but definatly not worst and If it is your lucky.
I like this one because it's so Intriguing. keep it up.
8/28/2004 c1 Hot stuff wants you
NIce job. It's not bad!
NIce job. It's not bad!
8/13/2004 c1 5Blackout the Swordsman
What inspired you to write this? I really like it. It sounds like the beginnings of a good mystery novel.
5Blackout the SwordsmanWhat inspired you to write this? I really like it. It sounds like the beginnings of a good mystery novel.
8/9/2004 c1 Beaten withered rose
interesting!
interesting!
8/8/2004 c1 depressed elf
THis is really good I like it!
THis is really good I like it!