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8/8/2004 c1 123GothicSpook
I like it! Very true! I wrote a similar poem about failure a little while ago.
I do have one suggestion, try not to shorten your words (eg. see to c) it doesnt look right and can confuse some people and also stops the flow of the poem.
8/8/2004 c1 243Manuel Fajar
I like the poem. I think you might strengthen it by making Bad Luck be in love with the author. Just a thought. —m—

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