for Moving On11/14/2004 c1 
6N47R3
never say never again. especially with friends. You can still be friends, maybe not quite as close, but still, the love of a friend is still in Your heart.
6N47R3never say never again. especially with friends. You can still be friends, maybe not quite as close, but still, the love of a friend is still in Your heart.
8/8/2004 c1 7Hyacintha
Guys, we can't live with them and we can't live without them. Oh well...
~*Letting Images Flow Into Words Is
Simply-Dazzling*~
7HyacinthaGuys, we can't live with them and we can't live without them. Oh well...
~*Letting Images Flow Into Words Is
Simply-Dazzling*~
8/8/2004 c1 lauren
i think this one should be shortened up a bit, for starters. you can pack everything down, condense it and only use the more important things, make ithe situation more vague so that more people can relate to it. but at the same time, you're kind of abstract about how you feel. i mean, you oviously say you're hurt, but describe the pain. also, the poem is so many feelings it could be like 5 differnt poems. it's hard for the reader to keep up. first you're like 'i'm hurt' and then 'but i'm okay' and stuff.
*lauren*
i think this one should be shortened up a bit, for starters. you can pack everything down, condense it and only use the more important things, make ithe situation more vague so that more people can relate to it. but at the same time, you're kind of abstract about how you feel. i mean, you oviously say you're hurt, but describe the pain. also, the poem is so many feelings it could be like 5 differnt poems. it's hard for the reader to keep up. first you're like 'i'm hurt' and then 'but i'm okay' and stuff.
*lauren*