12/13/2004 c1 6N47R3
the words i love You never mean quite as much as when i say them to You. i see people toss them around as well. it's just so sad that people will settle for such an imitation as lust...
the words i love You never mean quite as much as when i say them to You. i see people toss them around as well. it's just so sad that people will settle for such an imitation as lust...
10/16/2004 c1 72linaeve
agreed, but i suppose everyone's take on 'love' differs in intensity.
cheers,
lin.
agreed, but i suppose everyone's take on 'love' differs in intensity.
cheers,
lin.
8/30/2004 c1 Sniffles15
It's so true how easily those words are tossed around, and its also true that the only ones that win are those that truly mean what they're saying. Excellent work.
-Sniffles
It's so true how easily those words are tossed around, and its also true that the only ones that win are those that truly mean what they're saying. Excellent work.
-Sniffles
8/28/2004 c1 29Livi Z
*sighs* so true, so true. Kids these days. Wait...I'm a kid these days! Ah well. Good poem. I like the metaphor-ness of the poem. 'Yet a poison to say' so true, so true. Again, good job!
*sighs* so true, so true. Kids these days. Wait...I'm a kid these days! Ah well. Good poem. I like the metaphor-ness of the poem. 'Yet a poison to say' so true, so true. Again, good job!
8/19/2004 c1 16Andromede
I know what you mean... Kinda reminds me of a poem i wrote called puppet. Love makes people do stuff.
I know what you mean... Kinda reminds me of a poem i wrote called puppet. Love makes people do stuff.
8/8/2004 c1 lauren
very nice. this is my favorite of yours thus far.
*lauren*(
very nice. this is my favorite of yours thus far.
*lauren*(
8/8/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
wow do i so know that feeling! omg, this makes me want to cry. same thing happens to me all the time, and i fall for it, argh! wonderful poem, very relatable
wow do i so know that feeling! omg, this makes me want to cry. same thing happens to me all the time, and i fall for it, argh! wonderful poem, very relatable