
3/22/2005 c1
2BKGal-24
Wow, this was really blunt and honest and unfortunately so many mother's think the only way to motivate someone is through insults. So was this it? A one shot? It was good.

Wow, this was really blunt and honest and unfortunately so many mother's think the only way to motivate someone is through insults. So was this it? A one shot? It was good.
11/5/2004 c1 katie
this is so good! I can totally relate to Ida, and furthermore, the story was so good that even if I weren't overweight, I probably could. keep up the good work!
this is so good! I can totally relate to Ida, and furthermore, the story was so good that even if I weren't overweight, I probably could. keep up the good work!
9/19/2004 c1 fatigued
That was beautiful- short, but incredibly powerful. I have no idea how you did it, but the way you conveyed Ida's depression makes it feel so real I could cry for her. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece.
That was beautiful- short, but incredibly powerful. I have no idea how you did it, but the way you conveyed Ida's depression makes it feel so real I could cry for her. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece.
8/10/2004 c1 Ailenat
poor girl
this story rocks
keep writing
Did you mention the girl's name because I can't seem to remember it
i have really short term memory tho, so oh well
poor girl
this story rocks
keep writing
Did you mention the girl's name because I can't seem to remember it
i have really short term memory tho, so oh well
8/10/2004 c1
27Master of the Chimps
wow... I know the feeling 'bout eating! You described it really well! please continue soon :)

wow... I know the feeling 'bout eating! You described it really well! please continue soon :)