for My Kay:Crimson Regret6/10/2005 c1 
4Kaykuyo Locke
This is awesome. Love the use of Evanescence lyrics. ^_^; I think thats creative. Your love of Kayley and Evanescence both really shine in this poem.
4Kaykuyo LockeThis is awesome. Love the use of Evanescence lyrics. ^_^; I think thats creative. Your love of Kayley and Evanescence both really shine in this poem.
10/31/2004 c1 untilI
::laughs like the maniac she is at her computer:: HA! IN YOUR FACE! I CAN REVIEW HER WORK AN' THERE'S NOT A THING YOU CAN DO TO STOP ME! MUAHAHAHHA!
::clears her throat and gets all serious like again:: WEll, anyways, I have to save I absolutely loved it. ALl of your work has a lot of voice in it and it really defines you. You've made a few references to Kay when you reviewd my work and now I finally understand. Over all, the piece is great, but you might wanna look over the spelling and grammar before you put it up. Keep up the good work Cry!
~Twilight
::laughs like the maniac she is at her computer:: HA! IN YOUR FACE! I CAN REVIEW HER WORK AN' THERE'S NOT A THING YOU CAN DO TO STOP ME! MUAHAHAHHA!
::clears her throat and gets all serious like again:: WEll, anyways, I have to save I absolutely loved it. ALl of your work has a lot of voice in it and it really defines you. You've made a few references to Kay when you reviewd my work and now I finally understand. Over all, the piece is great, but you might wanna look over the spelling and grammar before you put it up. Keep up the good work Cry!
~Twilight
9/22/2004 c1 Mega Blonde
I see that this is really hurting you about Kay. We did not lie to you. We were merely trying to get you out of something you couldn't handle. This song tells all. Take the time to heal, take the time to breathe, take the time to find yourself and what you love about you. Don't depend on someone else to keep you going, it will do nothing but give you heartache. Let your mind breathe living breath. Give your heart rest from weary. What you lost, if it is meant to come back, the truth will always prevail. She will return if she can get past her own demons.
I see that this is really hurting you about Kay. We did not lie to you. We were merely trying to get you out of something you couldn't handle. This song tells all. Take the time to heal, take the time to breathe, take the time to find yourself and what you love about you. Don't depend on someone else to keep you going, it will do nothing but give you heartache. Let your mind breathe living breath. Give your heart rest from weary. What you lost, if it is meant to come back, the truth will always prevail. She will return if she can get past her own demons.
9/21/2004 c1 15Gothic Renegade
sad...a good song fic. I don't even really like song fics, but this was great!...though sad...it was cool. Me likey alot!
15Gothic Renegadesad...a good song fic. I don't even really like song fics, but this was great!...though sad...it was cool. Me likey alot!
9/21/2004 c1 54Claudio Sanchez
i guess im not as eloquent a review-er as u...but i think this good. haha.
54Claudio Sanchezi guess im not as eloquent a review-er as u...but i think this good. haha.
8/16/2004 c1 36The Harlequin Doll
Yes, I am very distubed. But Kayley was the only thing keeping me alive. I am immortal, I can try to die, and trust me oneday I will. I love you Kay, Kayley, my Kay.
36The Harlequin DollYes, I am very distubed. But Kayley was the only thing keeping me alive. I am immortal, I can try to die, and trust me oneday I will. I love you Kay, Kayley, my Kay.