for Murder in the bookstore10/31/2004 c1 
20Nanners
Ahh! No! The bookstore is the last safe place! No terror there! NO TERROR THERE!
*runs around in panic*
20NannersAhh! No! The bookstore is the last safe place! No terror there! NO TERROR THERE!
*runs around in panic*
8/12/2004 c1 1Justin Valentine
Punctuation. Proper grammar. The shift key. They're your best friends. Use them.
1Justin ValentinePunctuation. Proper grammar. The shift key. They're your best friends. Use them.
8/12/2004 c1 1BeccaBoo14
six died? that's so sad.this is a pretty cool story... but now i see why people call you the run-on man :-) YOU HAVE A LOT OF STORIES, DUDE, lol. if i wrote as many things as you, none of it would be stories, all poems! lol!
but this is a pretty original story... even if i don't see the actual point of it... but why does anyone need to have a point when it comes to what goes through your head, it's just, there.
okay, i'm getting ahead of myself, but i like this :-)
1BeccaBoo14six died? that's so sad.this is a pretty cool story... but now i see why people call you the run-on man :-) YOU HAVE A LOT OF STORIES, DUDE, lol. if i wrote as many things as you, none of it would be stories, all poems! lol!
but this is a pretty original story... even if i don't see the actual point of it... but why does anyone need to have a point when it comes to what goes through your head, it's just, there.
okay, i'm getting ahead of myself, but i like this :-)