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9/17/2004 c1 81daphnegray78
Hah. Sounds like my mom. o.O Nicely done.
~Daphne~
8/27/2004 c1 9Mormon Princess 1
vERY INTERESTING POEM YOU'VE GOT HERE. I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT TO THINK! LOL!
8/25/2004 c1 123Raya Dronaile
that was pretty cool. Sounds a lot like families today, especially the one i an awwy from. Rather, my dad kicked me out. lol...anyhow, very good poem, i like you work! ^_^
8/24/2004 c1 128i-kill-4-fun
this is my parents. i am the worm. its awesome how u capture this all.
8/14/2004 c1 Brandy Bear
nice job a little weird tho lol
BrandyBear
8/13/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
uh ok... lol.. very creepy.. nice format.. if theres a metaphor im missing it
8/12/2004 c1 10Rebecca Kelsey
Very interesting. Reminds me of an episode of one fo my favorite shows, these girls were in training and one of the trainers called one girl a maggot. heh, that girl killed herself. Well, great poem! *even though I mentioned suicide, I liked the poem. lol*
8/12/2004 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Intresting...

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