
8/27/2004 c1
9Mormon Princess 1
vERY INTERESTING POEM YOU'VE GOT HERE. I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT TO THINK! LOL!

vERY INTERESTING POEM YOU'VE GOT HERE. I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT TO THINK! LOL!
8/25/2004 c1
123Raya Dronaile
that was pretty cool. Sounds a lot like families today, especially the one i an awwy from. Rather, my dad kicked me out. lol...anyhow, very good poem, i like you work! ^_^

that was pretty cool. Sounds a lot like families today, especially the one i an awwy from. Rather, my dad kicked me out. lol...anyhow, very good poem, i like you work! ^_^
8/13/2004 c1
612simpleplan13
uh ok... lol.. very creepy.. nice format.. if theres a metaphor im missing it

uh ok... lol.. very creepy.. nice format.. if theres a metaphor im missing it
8/12/2004 c1
10Rebecca Kelsey
Very interesting. Reminds me of an episode of one fo my favorite shows, these girls were in training and one of the trainers called one girl a maggot. heh, that girl killed herself. Well, great poem! *even though I mentioned suicide, I liked the poem. lol*

Very interesting. Reminds me of an episode of one fo my favorite shows, these girls were in training and one of the trainers called one girl a maggot. heh, that girl killed herself. Well, great poem! *even though I mentioned suicide, I liked the poem. lol*