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12/6/2004 c1 3cafebrulot
This sounds like a song. It has a wonderful pattern to it. Especially at the end of the stanzas.

Yeah, you cry.Yeah, you lie.Yeah, you need someone,but you don’t care at all.

I can't read it without putting singsong inflection on it.
9/8/2004 c1 3Powerof1P3PadfootsGrl
cool and very true! you don't realize a good thing until it goes away...
8/12/2004 c1 77JustForgetMe
That is insane! I know what your saying in this poem.Its good!

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