
5/1/2008 c1 demon Naria
I really like your story right from the beginning it's funny!
I really like your story right from the beginning it's funny!
8/22/2004 c3
10Ridley Jack
Yay! I get to be the cool reviewy person! *throws confetti in air* Balloons and string! Lol, erm...ya... Your story is sounding kakkoi (cool) -er and kakkoi-er! Only thing is, I can't remember what colour Rei's hair was before...well, I guess I'll have to look back! Forget what I said before, I am SO adding you to my fave list! I get to be cool reviewy person! Yay! I've never been one of those before! :P Things are getting clearer (about the plot and what-not [he he, I'm a poet and I didn't even know it...I wish I could rhyme all the time...lol, sry, that won't happen again]) Well, I guess it should, because that's what a normal story does, Lisa. Erm...ok, I really have to stop talking to myself on reviews... Ok, this is getting quite long, so ttfn (ta ta for now)
-Spork Queen(tm) and consort Alonzo(tm)
-Lisa Guinevere-Jean

Yay! I get to be the cool reviewy person! *throws confetti in air* Balloons and string! Lol, erm...ya... Your story is sounding kakkoi (cool) -er and kakkoi-er! Only thing is, I can't remember what colour Rei's hair was before...well, I guess I'll have to look back! Forget what I said before, I am SO adding you to my fave list! I get to be cool reviewy person! Yay! I've never been one of those before! :P Things are getting clearer (about the plot and what-not [he he, I'm a poet and I didn't even know it...I wish I could rhyme all the time...lol, sry, that won't happen again]) Well, I guess it should, because that's what a normal story does, Lisa. Erm...ok, I really have to stop talking to myself on reviews... Ok, this is getting quite long, so ttfn (ta ta for now)
-Spork Queen(tm) and consort Alonzo(tm)
-Lisa Guinevere-Jean
8/19/2004 c3
3Tenni
Okay. I understand. This chapter was good; it helped me understand the characters more and get what they were there to do. Right now I'm sort of figuring out whose going to get paired with who, but I may be wrong.

Okay. I understand. This chapter was good; it helped me understand the characters more and get what they were there to do. Right now I'm sort of figuring out whose going to get paired with who, but I may be wrong.
8/18/2004 c2
10Ridley Jack
Ha ha! This story is so cool! I love the characters, 'specially Akira and Rei! And if I didn't already have 30 stories on my list, I'd add you! *mumble* well, there is that one story that I don't really like anymore, and it's finished...*normal tone* eh he...sry 'bout that, just sorta talking to myself. So, ya, love the story, keep writing, blah blah, (in case you're wondering, I'm a bit hyper) neways, love it, keep updating..btw, how often do you update? Don't you think that it should show the last TWO times an author updated, so that you could estimate how often they update? I do. I think it would help a lot. Don't you? Wait, I think I already asked that. Ok, this is getting kinda long, and I'm sure that you're getting tired of reading this, so ja ne!
Spork Queen and her consort Alonzo(tm) (my alter-egos)

Ha ha! This story is so cool! I love the characters, 'specially Akira and Rei! And if I didn't already have 30 stories on my list, I'd add you! *mumble* well, there is that one story that I don't really like anymore, and it's finished...*normal tone* eh he...sry 'bout that, just sorta talking to myself. So, ya, love the story, keep writing, blah blah, (in case you're wondering, I'm a bit hyper) neways, love it, keep updating..btw, how often do you update? Don't you think that it should show the last TWO times an author updated, so that you could estimate how often they update? I do. I think it would help a lot. Don't you? Wait, I think I already asked that. Ok, this is getting kinda long, and I'm sure that you're getting tired of reading this, so ja ne!
Spork Queen and her consort Alonzo(tm) (my alter-egos)
8/18/2004 c1 Ridley Jack
They accepted it easily, but you sort of explain that, so I can't complain. I like your writing style...funny, but get things done. I wanna be able to write like that.
They accepted it easily, but you sort of explain that, so I can't complain. I like your writing style...funny, but get things done. I wanna be able to write like that.
8/13/2004 c2
2Sister-two
Woot, I loved this story, update! OPnly a few grammar/spelling mistakes and very nicely written. Alot of the characters remind me of me and my friend tho, strangely enough. Kepp up the awesoem job!

Woot, I loved this story, update! OPnly a few grammar/spelling mistakes and very nicely written. Alot of the characters remind me of me and my friend tho, strangely enough. Kepp up the awesoem job!
8/13/2004 c2
3Tenni
Wow. You update fast. This chapter was really good. Are you gonna make a chapter for each character's POV of what happens? Anyhow, I can't wait to see the parings.

Wow. You update fast. This chapter was really good. Are you gonna make a chapter for each character's POV of what happens? Anyhow, I can't wait to see the parings.
8/13/2004 c2
8gossamerdragon
Hey, I thought this was pretty cool! Toru sounds interesting, i wanna know why he's so quiet. I'm loking forward to more! ^_^ Being able to stop time would be pretty cool! and having blue hair would be too! :p

Hey, I thought this was pretty cool! Toru sounds interesting, i wanna know why he's so quiet. I'm loking forward to more! ^_^ Being able to stop time would be pretty cool! and having blue hair would be too! :p